lovely story

Aww that was sweet. I love Elaine :D

Nice fic :) I think you porttrayed the characters really well, I can really imagine Elaine and Heston as a couple... I doubt it will work out with Ed! :P

Here's that review I promised you about seven hours ago haha. I loved it. Beautiful one-shot.

Heston peered closely at her, seeing a solitary tear slid down her cheek and disappear for ever into the grey silky material of the blouse she was wearing. He placed a hand on her cheek, gently smudging away the glistening trail that that one tear had left with the pad of his thumb. "What's wrong?" he asked, his voice concerned, suddenly sounding nothing like the Heston that Elaine had come to know...and love.

for some reason, I adore that bit.

I've read this fic like twenty times already today.

Please write more when you get the chance.

Gemii..(L)