this is a beautiful story maybe you would consider writing a what if where balinor stays in Ealdor?

What about cookie dough ice cream? Could you do that?

I'll take some cookie dough please :D It was wonderful! You should write one from Arthur's POV as well, I know you'd do well :3 The only reason I've asked you to write more (On two things) is because I cannot write well, but I know you can :3 I always feel awkward suggesting someone do something, I don't want to make them feel obligated :P Cheers! 3

This was lovely. There isn't enough fiction about Balinor and Merlin. You handle the characters so well. Again, truly lovely.

Well written.

And you could also just buy some non-burnt ones from the store

-MP

Wow...lovely!

*cry* I am angry they killed him off, Balinor I mean. They should bring him back.

Anyway, great short story.

That was amazing! So sad but really good!

Good story! This episode is my favorite, and I really like hearing Balinor's POV. Thanks for writing!