This story is too cliche, it's like you're just monologuing the script or the Wiki.

First of all, Saya ISN'T a genius, if she was a genius, she'd follow her own advice, like pointing out they respond to sound and then doing the world a favor and shutting her loud mouth. Instead she screams and yells for no good reason in front of a horde of zombies. Here's Saya...

Alice: I have to pee

Saya: WHY THE HELL DO YOU HAVE TO PEE?! WHY DO YOU HAVE BODILY FUNCTIONS?!

Zombies: -Groan- moves towards shouting

Rest of the Group: Damn

That's Saya in a nutshell.

Takashi is also NOT a leader, he is indecisive, lazy, and childish, his obsession with Rei alone is part of the entire problem. He hesitated, letting one of their most valuable members, Hisashi, die. He runs a pity party because Rei was tired of HIS immaturity and HIS attitude and decided to date a real man, and then to top it all off, when he gets Rei, he decides he wants to play the field. He ignores her when it came to Shido, whom had he let die, then NONE of that shit would have happened, Shido would not have lived long enough to make it to the Takagi estate, he wouldn't have crashed the bus into the barrier, and Saya's parents, would probably still be alive. So to put it simply Takashi is nothing more than a liability.

Shizuka is the most invaluable member of that group, because she has MEDICAL knowledge, you cannot survive an apocalypse without medical knowledge. I used to watch Doomsday Preppers, and the lack of medical knowledge is astounding. For example, people stockpile common antibiotics like Amoxacillin and Augmentin to handle physical infections, those two drugs work on DISEASES, they don't work on the kind of infections you get from a cut or scrape, for that, you need something like Bactrim or at the very least, the cleaning tabs they use for aquariums. I've seen people stock up on asprin for when people get injuries and I deal with family members every day whom take Alieve for everything and then wonder, why am I still in pain. Because different pain relievers work on different pains, Asprin works for headaches, toothaches, and things like that, Alieve works on joints ONLY, that's why they constantly advertise it for people with arthritis, but if you PULL A MUSCLE, sprain a muscle, or twist a muscle, you'd use an anti-inflammatory, Ibuprofin, like Advil or Motrin, otherwise you're not addressing the reason WHY you're in pain. There's other tidbits of information that only someone like Shizuka or anyone with medical knowledge would know, like constantly dousing a wound with alcohol or peroxide actually INCREASES your chance of an infection, because those also kill the bacteria that allow your wounds to scab over, meaning the wound will remain open to outside contaminants. So Shizuka is far more important than Saya or Takashi.

i don't see why people had problems with the plot of this story it was pretty good the only thing i could find wrong was Naruto lack of motivation and determination and him not being at full power but you gave a reason to that so i have no issues all in all pretty good story

Well! I'd say that reading this fanfic is such amazing experience that I'd love to watch it as an anime! I think that the future civilitation would still be destroyed though, as an aftermath of last battle's massive atmospheric and geographic destructions. One thing that I don't feel right is how there was no military response whatsoever whenever the hated Azrael appeared. Anyway, I'd like to say THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the adventure!

Good idea but very poor followthough. So many things that are wrong or you did not understand/know. After Naruto got back from training trip with 2-4 months Pein attacked. Then after Pein attacked the hidden leaf the 4 ninja war happened within a month or two at most 4 months.. That means the war would happened or at least Naruto would have done the waterfall of truth training and overcome his dark side.

I find it unrealistic that Naruto would only save the ‘main’ cast only. And I never noticed him using his shadow clones, he could clear that school in seconds to a minute and save most of them :/ just because it’s overpowered, atleast it’s from cannon and realistic for Naruto.

only 2 chapters in and i've seen enough problems there'll fit in an entire story let only 2 chapters. sigh, while i'll admit i did like the first chapters there were a lot of freaking plotholes the biggest being the kyuubi "future sight" since she no doubt would've avoided ANY danger that came her way. however the problem most definitely is in the 2nd chapter. the first chapter of any story is very important because it sets and establises the points and focus of the story. so when its been established that naruto wishes to go help the future against their upcoming zombie apocalypse and as a side quest help the future leaders of the future survive, you don't have naruto stand there like a dickwad while 2 of the people he is suppose to protect are in immediate danger. sure hizashi wasn't one of the main people he wasn't suppose to protect but its been established in the first chapter that naruto willingly choose to go to the future mainly to help the people there survive NOT to protect takashi's group only when naruto agreed to go to the future did kyu said anything about the group, now if naruto had the mind set of a terminator then it would make sense. now let's also talk about naruto personality, that shit is ALL over the place. seriously, in the first chapter naruto seems to be himself mostly however as soon as he enter the portal it was like one person came in then five completely different people came out. first he's kakashi, then he's the terminator, then kirito from SAO, then he's eren freaking yeager wanting to destroy all of the tita...i mean zombies, and then he turns into revy from black lagoon, only to turn back into the terminator. i hope this gets better in future chapters... but i don't know about that -_-'

Trash

This was a good story

The only thing that I disliked about it was the virus being sentient

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Ch 3
That is my version of the said jutsu
AIA E Haka (With All power the otherwordy to perish)

Don't really see any of Naruto's character traits in this uncaring Sasuke ish version. I mean he waited on Hizashi getting bitten and did nothing to warn them of the dangers. He explains nothing clearly or coherently and derides Takeshi for not trusting him despite the fact that from Takashi's point of view he's made a very poor showing of leadership skills and basic empathy

LIKE HOW NARUTO IS SO... YEAH LIKE THAT

I LOVE HOW YOU MADE THE 9 TAILS A FEMALE... HMMH

Where the fuck is the Kyuubi?

Awesome!