I’m not crying, you are! Wow I freaking love this so much! Not gonna lie, every time they do the “gotcha” thing it warms my heart and I can’t stop smiling.

This is amazingly spot on, especially considering when you wrote it. You so nailed the Doctor and River's relationship both present and future.

Amy and Rory were already playing the role of parents, breaking up their fights, and they didn't even know it!

The interaction with Amy was beautiful. My heart when he talked about the Ponds having little Puddles running around. It was so completely adorable.

His reasons for not getting involved with River or other humans fit so well with established canon. Yeah he had Marilyn and Liz I but they were flings. He can accept those but he knows with River he would be so much more. He has already seen her on her last day and since she knows his name he knows who she has to be to him. That scares him because as much as he might want this; he knows how it will end.

Oh, wow, I love this! I like how it goes from light and funny to darker and sad and back to light and funny without missing a beat. And you got the character interactions perfect. Love it! Perfect little one-shot! :3

Oh, this was amazing! And Puddles? Oh my gosh. Somewhere I'm imagining the Ponds together in the past raising their kids and always referring to them as "the Puddles." That is my new headcanon.

Great job!

Wow. I started reading this expecting light humor, which I got, and then by the end it had turned all deep and sad and intense. (And Puddles! Damn, but that is awesome. Very Doctor-y, and completely and absolutely adorable.)

I loved this. You did a brilliant job. :)

I'm an AUSTRALIAN spelling and grammer freak and I think your doing pretty well with the English writing style.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
TimeGirl!

I loved this!

sweet! and i love that, the Ponds and the Puddles. ;)

Awesome :D I love it, and I'm glad he promised to visit. As for your British, you could stand to spell things the British way :) (like favourite, chequered, realise, etc.)

Loved this story! I love the way you write everyone and the relationships between everyone!

gah! I loved this lil' one shot, thank you so much for posting it. You got Amy and the doctor's relationship perfectly if I do say so myself, which, I do!

I love this :)