Reviews for The Head and The Heart
castle2126 chapter 24 . 8/13/2019
Oh yeah first hurt him badly and crush his heart and then when he try to heal from hurting just say that "well if he is moving on then why shouldn't I" and spread your legs for next man you got. She just can't wait for him and show how much he is worth and she expects him to wait for her till eternity and treat you like princes. Bloody hypocritical bitch that she is.
unannalome7 chapter 24 . 1/10/2016
I know I'm reading this two years after your last update but it really had me captivated. I enjoyed every sentence on this fanfiction. thankyou very much for writing things, even if you don't belive it, most of the words you have written have helped me thinking too about things you said. so a very big hug. thankyu!
mrjelynch chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
"He mine (might) as well have."
"And oh how she wanted him too." (also?, to)
mrjelynch chapter 15 . 1/28/2015
Be more aware of the correct usage of:
to versus too
then versus than.

What about her relationships outside of Rick? Opportunity in this chapter to also discuss what attracted her to Will and other men. What did she see in them that was similar to or different from what she sees in Castle? She wouldn't have dated Will for six months if he didn't make her happy.
tom chapter 24 . 11/13/2014
Scrappy conclusion to this otherwise well executed fanfic
damariz chapter 24 . 8/28/2012
Read the whole set of one shots at a sitting... ignoring my children. What a well done piece. Brava!
Ke14uk chapter 24 . 8/2/2012
Hi, I've been reading your story as per the show is being broadcasting in the UK (Always is actually on next Wednesday) and I just wanted to thank you for your effort. I really enjoyed ready your story, it fits so well with the season, it was a good addition to the weekly episodes. Don't know if you plan on doing the same thing for next season, but one thing is sure, you'd do the show justice. So Thank You! And have a great summer too.
Akire87 chapter 24 . 7/10/2012
Just wanna say thnx for a nice FF :) really enjoyed it :)
Deb838 chapter 24 . 5/19/2012
I've just finished reading this through... wow, what insight you have to the way a mind might work.

I really enjoyed this perspective.

The final chapter... awesome - you finished this series off so well!
Always-Snow chapter 24 . 5/13/2012
I like the interaction between her and , but I was surprised to know that you skipped "Undead Again". I really want to see her comments from Castle's last case statement, to knowing that Castle pull away is becoz of her lies, and Castle's promise of "Tomorrow". Maybe you can did it afterwards? Thx
Mark C chapter 24 . 5/11/2012
This was the perfect way to end the story.

You did a wonderful job of showing what was going on in Kate's head when she was by herself in the closing moments of the episode up to where she ends up at Castle's loft. I really liked how you had Kate finally see what Castle means to her and finally decides to follow her heart down a new path.

Excellent job.
kimmiesjoy chapter 24 . 5/9/2012
It was a beautifully told story, and im sorry its over but i cant help but be glad that it ended the way it did.. may we all get such an ending.

You wrote it wonderfully. :)
Madwine chapter 24 . 5/9/2012
Awnnn. Wonderful. I adored it. Awesome fic. :)
Rosaline-C chapter 24 . 5/9/2012
It's... it's... it's over... *sniffles slightly*

I couldn't imagine a better ending for a better story. It has been a pleasure reading this. Thanks for writing Lizzie.

~Rose
LittleLizzieZentara chapter 24 . 5/8/2012
"His voice, his touch...everything him. He was there. In her head, her heart, her veins. He was guiding her back, keeping her fighting. She held on with the knowledge that it didn't matter what he did, because he hadn't betrayed her."

I think this is the perfect summation of what was in Kate's heart and mind from the ledge to the loft and beyond.
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