Nooooo! It is so good. Please let me know it you keep going with it. I love it

Thank you

Please make a chapter where Brian finds out that mia and roman slept together, and he gets Really Angry that he files for divorce and roman kills himself!

These set of stories were amazing! I'm so thankful Nola isn't dead! Thank you for being such an amazing writer.

This story was great right up until the whole Rome and Mia affair, I know this is fanfiction writing but it just didn't flow with the story you had written so far. It seemed like the whole point of doing it was just to dirty up Mia's character a little bit and not seem like shuch a goody two shoes all the time but felt to forced. Now that you've opened this can of worms you should write a story and have it deal with the fallout of what if Brian found out or if one of them decides to tell him.

Like I said before the story was pretty damn good and I would be interested in any future writings in this AU. I don't mean to harp on this and I realize you were trying to convey the emotions and the things people do when there in pain, but I thought it was pointless to have Roman banging Mia towards then end. I saw the possibilty of you doing it in the last story but just hoped you wouldn't go there with it. Having them hookup like they did the way they did makes Roman(a character I like)look like a complete douchebag and Mia comes off even though she's in pain(thinking that Brian was dead) looking like a selfish little slut. Sorry if I sound like I'm ranting but this series was pretty good until you made Roman and Mia look cheap and trashy.

The story is pretty good, the only thing I have a problem with is the whole Mia and Roman hooking up thing. I realize why you did it but at the same time I thought it was completely wrong for this story. You took 2 likable characters and made one a backstabber and the other you make seem like a slut.

Wow!

Finally read this, I remember reading like the first couple chapters way back when, but I never got around to finishing.

I've had so many WTF moments reading this, seriously a mad rollercoatser of a story.
I didn't see the Anders thing coming, but it was a smart tie in for the plot.

I knew she wasn't dead! I seriously couldn't help but keep thinking this chicgonak is gonna pop up one day. I need to know what happened to her, why she played dead.

This was so exciting and sad, sometimes I couldn't believe what was happening, I read this in one go, couldn't stop.

I disliked the Mia/Roman thing, I won't bash it, but I didn't think it was needed. Maybe for the added drama.

Sad that so many ppl died, but it truly added to the suspense and somber feeling that occasionally took over. Even if I sorta mad sometimes. Lol.

Fabulous job, really exciting read.

Wow what a great story! I loved it sorry its been like a year since you posted it but i still love it i just made this account. I hope you write a sequel to this explaining what is going on with Nola and some how get Dom and Letty wrapped in to that mess because its not normal for them to be away from the excitement and thrill for to long. You are and awesome writer and i am kinda just rereading your stories over and over again along with STR8BKCHICK stories i am really sad that you guys have not posted any thing in awhile and that you come back! Keep writing!

omg this story is amazing! all the twists and turns and unfortunate deaths of different characters!

so well written, i was close to crying every time something bad happened.

and the ending! i totally was not expecting that! im sitting here in shock and disbelief! its crazy! i cant wait to see what happens next, because there is still a lot of story to tell

great job, thanks for writing

Love it. .

Well I love her too! Wait seriously their kids are calling Letty Ma! The damage this is gonna cause. It was a amazing Dotty scene. :) Hmmm what have Han/Nola been up to?

OMG OMG OMG OMG ! soo sad you ended it like that, but thank god nola's alive ! omg i wish there was one more chapter just to sum of nola and letty and ther kids ! i love don and letty and this story was completly amazing ! loved ever second of this story and the other one. cant wait for more stories to come your truly an amazing writer and know how to capture letty and dom perfectly with every story you write :DDDD

great chapter !

You can't leave me there! I was so excited when my thing said that I had 2 updates and I thought that this was the first one, and I was all excited but I counted wrong. I don't like this. Nola is a bitch and I don't like her a lot right now. How could she leave her kids? How could Han leave those kids? They think that Dom and Letty are their parents and they aren't doing anything to help that and then they bring Dom and Letty this baby. My first thought was, Han what the hell did you get yourself into? And then I kept reading and it was all like, this is Nola's baby and that made me even more mad. I can't stand that she has left all of those kids and everything! How could she leave everything? She has some serious explaining to do before I go crazzzzzy!

Post More ASAP

i have to agree that is the best dotty scene i have ever read wow that was hot! sad it is over but look forward to a sequel so we can find out what han and nola have been up to plz write again soon