Reviews for Moment With You
XangelofosloX chapter 9 . 5/11/2012
i am a real book worm but i dont think i have enjoyed reading as much as i have today.

i loved how you wrote this story.

how you had john and torrie just meet up at the right place at the right time.

john needed torrie after what that stupid son of.., calm down Aasta (sorry was survivor series was horrible)

torrie needed john after everything that had happened with nick.

sometimes you cant predict what is going to happen just have to see where fate takes you.

i hope stacy and torrie make up.

lovely lovely story

(i hope you are getting these and i am doing this right)
Ainat chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
I'm sorry for the very late review. It has been a week since you updated and I'm only reviewing it now. I'm sorry. :(

John learned about Torrie's break up first because she told him about it face-to-face - it's easier to communicate with someone that is at our side. I don't understand the reason Stacy didn't read the dozen messages Torrie sent three weeks ago. As Stacy told she didn't ignore Torrie's messages, probably she didn't receive most of them.

Stacy and Torrie don't spend time as they did before. They haven't seen each other for six months and Torrie seems to be putting all the blame on Stacy. If you don't see someone for so long, you are responsible too. Stacy invited Torrie to go to Mexico and Torrie almost refused to go. Stacy was trying to spend time with Torrie.

I don't think Stacy should have dropped Torrie to go met her boyfriend - wasn't she supposed to present them? However, Stacy and Torrie have been best friends for more than a decade and some topics shouldn't be discussed as if they are two girls in the nursery (in my opinion they acted that way).

Torrie was at the bar and who showed up on TV? John Cena! Since they met in New York it seems destiny wants them together. John's appearence distracted Torrie and it gave to the Eric guy time to put something in her drink. But at the same time, John "saved" her because she couldn't take her eyes from the TV screen and didn't taste her drink.

Is it me or John is always present in Torrie's memories? John has always been very nice and sweet with Torrie. He has always been there for her. He helped Torrie to get over her divorce and he even punched Peter.

Torrie called Stacy and then Stacy showed up and Torrie's door. They need to apologize each other. I'm sorry if I wrote that you didn't like. I'm trying to see both sides yet it isn't easy when one of the frinds seems to be turned into the bad guy. I think both let it happen to their friendship. UPDATE SOON! ;)
WalkingonFirex chapter 8 . 4/14/2012
I love this story! Sorry it's taken me so long to review, but you know my situation, lol. I loved Torrie's little daydream about John, it was so cute! And John can't get her off his mind, either. Hopefully, Torrie and John reunite again soon! Anyway, as I was saying, I love, love, love this story. It's right up there with Closer To You and Breathless. Keep writing, you know how much I love Jorrie! :)
Cena's baby doll chapter 9 . 4/12/2012
Loved the update!

Damn stacy for calling Tor a spoiled brat! How cud she leave Tor for a night out with her bF, yeah we know its George but still u don't leave ur best friend alone, when u invited her 4 a vacation and after she just told u she broke up with her BF! Not nice of Stace!

As 4 Johnny he saved Tor once again, I was in panic when that guy slipped something in her drink!

Next chap, what is Tor going to do to stop thinking of Johnny, is Stace there to make up?

I want Tor and John to meet up again soon, or maybe even jus share a phone call!

Please update!
punkabanas chapter 9 . 4/11/2012
WOOP. Finally here to update such an eventfull story :D duh duh duh, this story has gotten so far and I'm enjoying it! (:

I knew this whole trip had something bad coming towards it when Stacy began looking at her cell phone time to time. Right there you just know that it's about to go down. Their little argument was sort of uncalled for, and a little stupid- even though Stacy was oblivious to the past events. Then again I do agree with Torie and maybe George clooney is just taking over too much of Stacy's life, and thats when it tells you something ain't right. But torrie grew the right conscious and called her up, I really do hope Stacy forgives her.

John is such a sweet, adorable caring man that has been growing through some really bad times. All of this in his life and yet he's still standing strong. That's why John is yet still very inspiring.

It was so cute to see their little flashback. Really does show how close they were and just how much they need each other now- even if that is oblivious to them and all. But I do think that with time and the right moves? Things will get fixed ;)

Exciting upcoming events ! Looking forward to them!

xx michelle
ChaingangDiva chapter 9 . 4/11/2012
Hey Kelly

OMG this story is so good. I'm loving every part of it. Can't wait for the next update.

Luv Sheree xXx
GloriousMagpie chapter 9 . 4/11/2012
Well Well what a lovely chapter that was. it showed lots of big parts of torries life and a bit of drama as well really painted a picture of everything that has been inmportant to torrie.

i dont think torrie was too excited about going to mexico but once she actually got there i think she was really looking forwrd to. she and stacy was doing the typical girl getting ready thing lol.

i felt so sorry for torrie when she got ditched for george clooney. i have learnt from expirience that if you ditch your best friends then it casues a lot of problems. i think torrie was really hurt by stacy doing that.

that argument was really explosive. i can understand stacy saying that torrie was being melodramatic but then again if she was actually around then she would know what torrie was going through. i really hope that the two of them sort things out. they havre been friends too long for something to ruin it like a boyfriend.

That bloke in the bar was a real a***ole. Torrie was clearly vulnerable and he decided to spike her drink. She could have got herself in serious trouble and that guy wouldn’t have thought twice about it.

Raw came on the tele and just the image of john Cena saved Torrie from disaster thank god for that. I loved the line that he had saved her without even any of them knowing that was great.

Torrie apologized to Stacy that’s a start hopefully they will sort out their differences.

That flashback was really amazing was definitely my favorite part of that chapter. It highlighted how much john always tried to be there for torrie no matter how big or how small the problem was. They have a bond that will never be broken no matter what is thrown at it. They could be collogues they could be friends they could be lovers and no matter what they will always come through the good and bad.

That was an amazing chapter. It was as if I was reading and seeing everything that was happening through torries eyes and that made the chapter very unique.

Very very good chapter

Update soon
therealchamps chapter 9 . 4/10/2012
So glad Torrie didnt take that drink. Hope her and Stacy are ok. I really loved the Raw opening segment. Best one ever. Loved how John just laughed it off with the busted lip, with everybody else looking concerned. Update soon.
FreakierThanFreaks chapter 9 . 4/10/2012
Wow, thank God that Johnny had been on television! Who knows what could have happened if Raw was on! Ah, what a nightmare that would have been! But just, thanks God...

Aweh, Johnny & the make a wish was really cute! I loved the part! (:

& the flashbacks were adorable! Especially the last one! Aweh! (:

I loved it! Update soon Kelly! (: xxx
Ainat chapter 8 . 4/6/2012
There is thin line between love sick and craziness (yes, I just made it up). Torrie is starting to scare me with her hallucinations. She is in love, I get it, but imagining John everywhere can be dangerous. One thing is to fantasize with him while listening to a music and other thing is to confuse him with another man.

John was so sweet with his niece. I'm sure he already wondered about being a father. *wink wink* ;)

I'm going to sound stupid, but it's hard for John not to love Liz. The truth is that she is a bitch; however, they had been together for years and she stood by his side when he was a nobody. Back then she wasn't with him because he had money, but people change over the years and probably nowadays Liz cares more about money than she does about John and their love.

Dear John, if you didn't sign a prenuptial agreement Liz is right when she says half of the house belongs to her. It won't look good when the judge and lawyers hear that John kicked Liz out of their house. And John better not to change the locks as he told her. The divorce is going to be a battle and John needs to behave or Liz will screw him (excuse my language).

It seems John are Liz are really over. Why did Matt feel concerned? John knew what to do. His marriage doesn't deserve an opportunity. Time to move on (and to be with Torrie :P).

This isn't a situation where Torrie puts her friends first. It a situation of principles and of keeping promises. I mean, Torrie promised to go with Stacy to Mexico - a trip that wasn't planned a day before; Torrie knew about if before she went to New York (she wasn't planning to sleep with John, but I'm sure he didn't drag all her energy). A trip to Mexico isn't something that can be cancelled from a hour to another.

Also, I'm pretty sure it won't be a sacrifice for a tired Torrie to go to Mexico. Apart from being a couple of more miles away from John, Mexico is a nice place to be and it has wonderful beaches. She will rest more there than if she was at home.

Please, don't bring George to this story. He may be dating Stacy in real life, but I can't stand the guy (I was never fond of him and I'm not going to turn a fan because he is dating Stacy).

Nice chapter. UPDATE SOON! ;)
GloriousMagpie chapter 8 . 4/4/2012
Well once again you pulled out an amazing chapter. It is no surprise that you are one of the most successful writers on fan fiction.

I loved the way you started the chapter with Torrie Waking up. It was a metaphorical way of saying that for two certain people it would be a new beginning. Very clever way of starting

Torrie lowered her head downwards, a sense of loneliness went through her.

Aww I felt so sorry for Torrie when I read that line I just wanted to give her a hug.

That made me laugh when torrie wanted to take the dogs with her and they were like noooo thank you lol. Those animals rezlly are like her kids lol.

Torrie turned back to the ocean for a split moment, she took another glance….no one was standing there. Torrie let a few breaths out, before she continued on running

Everytime you use the ocean scenes in your story it amazes me. You capture everything about that scene as if I was stood behind a rock watching torrie. When you write about the ocean you picture it so well.

"What? The hell…is going on?" Torrie started to run, picking up the pace.

Everything that was happening, was certainly starting to freak Torrie out

Yeah I would say it would freak her out lol. I think her mind is like a bit of a tornado right now everything is up in the air. I wonder what will happen when the tornado dies down.

"Well its great to see you too, I mean I get moaned at when I don't see you guys, then I get that…I can't win"

That line was by far the funniest line in the story. I had to stop reading for a bit because I could imagine cenas face looking like a teengager with his/her xbox banned lol. Was so funny was laughing for ages.

"John, She makes you miserable, not too mention….half of the family can't stand her"

Haha just what you want to hear from your family about the person you were with for so long and or who you loved lol.

"She wasn't that bad" John muttered. "I still love her, that's not ever going to change"

That must have been a tough realization for John to deal with.

The moment, the night will become just another distant memory. One that Torrie will remember forever. Some moments are just that special.

They linger within the heart.

What a really emotional line I could picture the emotion in torries eyes and that line was just so meaningful

"Well I don't really care, or bothered. Don't hold your breath. Get out of my house and I'll see you in a few days" John walked past his wife.

That’s it cena say it how it is. Know you had to stay strong but that was cold. But lets face it she probbally deserved it (story wise)

"Id rather swan drive, into a deep fat fryer" John shrugged his shoulders, to get out of his wife's clutches.

Haha 3rd funniest line that made me laugh

Matt stepped out, "So stalker or burglar"

John sighed softly "Worse than that"

Matt blinked at his response "What could be worse?"

"My wife" John answered.

HAHAHAHAHAHASHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHa that looked like a small conversation out of friends or everybody loves Raymond or two and a half men was really funny

But when it comes to her. You are her doormat. You let her just rail in, hook in with what? A few tears, a smile. It's all the same shit!"

Ok cenas brother really doesn’t like liz does he lol

No good comes from duelling on the past. He just wanted, John to move on.

I don’t think matt cena wanted to be that cruel and definitely didn’t want to argue like with him but he seems like a caring brother and just wants the best for john. The trouble is you could have a million people telling you the same thing but if you believe in something yourself then only john can change it

"JC 4 TW" a heart shape surrounded.

"I'm losing my mind"

Poor torrie. I don’t think you losing you mind tor I just think that when it comes to john it sets something magical off inside of you. Yes he was only a friend and you wernt expecting that night to happen but it did and its going to open up feelings that you didn’t know you had.

When it came to anyone else, John would know what to do? But when it comes to his wife. He just loses that strength, becomes fallen to her

Even I felt sorry for cena there. That is a hard thing to take and overcome.

"So what do you do then? If you still love them?"

"Sometimes love isn't enough"

That line brought a small tear to my eye. That’s all I am going to say.

Liz's eyes beamed a glare. "Go to hell,"

"No thanks, I don't want to see you there"

So glad there was a line as funny as that right after that quote came into johns line. That’s a brilliant line your getting really good at the comedy now lady

"Drop dead, Matt"

Even thought its not me matt I never wana see that lol I don’t wana drop dead lol

I think that was the last thing that torrie wanted. A trip to mexico. Especially with all the signs that day. Bad timing miss kiebler

Torrie breathed. "Here We Go Again" there wasn't a slightest chance, that trip to Mexico will be as memorable as New York.

Yeah torrie brace yourself I think you have opened a door to a whollle lot of feelings

That snow white thing seemed very meaningfull I know it was torrie but not sure what it represents hopefully will find out as the story goes on

Torrie found herself thinking about John, no matter what she does. Trying to push it away, its burning like a candle flame in her mind.

She wanted to search, run miles for him. Torrie had to wonder just how deep these feelings will go? Could it change? Could John and Torrie have some kind of future

I loved those last two lines. It ended the chapter with a question and then when that happens it just makes as and all your other fans beggg to know what going to happen next.

Amazing chapter really really really really really really amazing. It had every type of a emotion In there and as always had me picturing what was going on

Loved it

UPDATE SOOOOOON
Cena's baby doll chapter 8 . 4/4/2012
Awesome update! Loved it.

My best line in this chapter was when Liz said "go to hell" Johns reply "no thanks I dont want to see you there"

loved the way he stod up to her finally, i was getting in my last nerves and screaming no John u cant take her back NO! lol

People work thinking im insane, but yeah insanely in love with John Cena! LMAO!

lets hope he does go through with the divorce now and carry on with his life.

And Tor, she is soo falling in love with JOhn, gone to Mexico with Stacy, do we get to meet Stacys BF George Clooney! hehe...

As for wrestlemania, i cried when Johnny lost and saw the pic of him sitting there on the ramp totally heart broken and shocked!

And more tears for the match of an Era, the ending of that match was one of tru sportmanship! why cudnt that be shown with Rock and Cena! Brock is back and after Cena ... will see what happens there! Johnny Ace GM of both shows, no comment, hate that guy!

PLease update soon!
FreakierThanFreaks chapter 8 . 4/3/2012
I saw that picture of John & Torrie! Ah, I loved it! Cuute, much? Aha, I adored that & squealed like a little girl over it!

Awe, Torrie's in love with John! I love how she was seeing his face everywhere! D'aww! I thought that was adorable! (:

Yay! John finally dumped Liz! I love how he was like, "I'll change the locks," Gosh, I love that man more than words can explain! & Snow White? Bahaha, oh Johnny (:

& Stacy! Whoop, whoop! I miss her so much! & I don't like that she was/is dating George.. Isn't he like, a thousand years older than her? Bleech..

Well, great chapter! I cannot wait for the next one! & before I leave this review, I was wondering if you had read Fallen Superstar yet? I hadn't seen your review yet, so I was just wondering...

Sooo - yeah, update soon please! (:
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