Beautiful, funny and awesome story XD
I couldn't stop laughing, each chapter had me giggling or laughing out loud. XD

Oh my lord; it's been a few years, but I still love this story just as much as I did when I first read it. It's really funny, the characters are captured well, and I just love how their Pokémon are integral to the plot; that last part doesn't happen so often (from the little I've seen anyway). I just, I love it so much. (I'm gonna draw fanart of it. Eventually.)There are a few missing words here and there and a couple misspelled words, but they're not too distracting. This is my Most Favorite comashipping story of all. OOOHHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCH :D :D

OTP FEEEEEEEEELLS ... That was so damn perfect ! Even if I'm french I wanted to read that... And you use a lot of different words because I'm not bad in english ( I think, maybe I'm horrible at it XD ) and I needed to check a lot of words ! I love your style ! The only thing that disappointed me was that Ash's pikachu evolved... Dunno, it doesn't feel right... But I DON'T CARE because the story was sooooooooooo good ! Good job ! I hope you have wroten other comashipping's stories ;)

awesome fanfic

That ending was so brilliant! I loved it, it was so cute. Gah~ I admit that you really got me loving comashipping because of this. Good job!

Is it natural to feel the excitement and hype that this chapter and even the one before it exudes? I love the energy you give in this story. Charizard is amazing. lol

I like this idea of matchmaker!Charizard! It's hilarious how he and Paul interact. XD

I love this and I actually like the pairing of Charizard and Torterra. :D

Can you write a fic about Ash and Paul reacting to something bad happening to Reggie? (But in the same universe as Orange Cupid)

I like how you put the new regions and pokemon into this wonderful epilogue. Comashipping otp!

Such an intense battle.
I agree. Pokemon trash talk is horrible especially the unova battle club ones.

Stupid autocorrect. Typing on my phone.
D'awww, Charizard is such a great matchmaker. With lots of extra help though. (Paul's Pokemon, team rocket, Gary.)

Paul is such a foul mouthed badass.

Gen 1 beedrill. I'm lazy too.
Paul and Ah are so cute together!

You should ash x Paul as a shipping if this is primarily comashipping.
Other than that, amazing original story. I am loving it so far, and I love how the people stay true to their character and you made great new personalities for the Pokemon.