Incredible story. Well done. Hope to see it finished one day.

This story fucked me up in ways I can't describe. Curses and blessings upon you for writing this masterpiece.

It's simply the best Mass Effect fanfiction!

Your Shepard is a beautiful enigma - I love her

Please finish it :)

I love this take on a renegade Shepard, and I'd love to read more someday.

meh fic, will give you a C-

What a hell of a song. Found a bunch of versions on the youtube and all are just wow. you picked a hell of image to send with that.

Glad your back! Excellent as usual!

I've been reading this story for a while before I got an account, and I absolutely love it! Keep it coming!

Astonishingly moving, was absolutely not expecting that. Just looked up the parting glass, some lovely versions of it out there, so thank you.

This story has depth, intelligence and wit I'm very much enjoying it.

I absolutely love this story. It is intriguing and I think you capture Jack very well. The prose is fantastic and your writing style is very vivid. I don't hand out praise lightly, and I really hope you continue this story. I'm definitely enjoying it.

Nothing short of amazing; the way you explained the fault behind the Illusive Man's ideology is fantastic.

Interesting take. I like it.

This still remains as the deepest piece of work I've read on this site. I can't even begin to comprehend Shepard, she's unknowable, alien. That's a testament to your skill as a writer. I suspect you already know this, but it wouldn't hurt to remind you about it again.

Welcome back, MC. I hadn't realized how much I missed your prose until I read this chapter. Most enjoyable!

GT

Wow. I must say, you are making me like renegade Shep more and more.