I think ending with Sherlock returning really brings closure to this story...nice work!

This is so sad, it made my heart clench when I read it. Wonderful writings.

Stunning piece. Thank you so much for sharing.

This was definitely worth it! It was spectacular. I really like the mixing of past and future; that made the story much better and more interesting, as well as more dramatic. Great job!

Anddd I'm crying.

Xela

Thank you thank you thank you for making it happy. This was lovely and heart wrenching.

I'm bawling my eyes out right now. This...should never be read while listening to Sekaiichi Hatsukoi OST Disc 1 Tracks 15 to 19. GODS.

It's so good. You're an awesome writer. (And the end is just like how nearly everyone likes it to be, angry John ranting at Sherlock,then fluff. *cries* I want season 3 god dammit) But anyways,this is really good. :)

I love this fic.

I think I cried more when sherlock was back than when john wrote I'll always love him on his blog...

The hobbit was a nice touch. Ha.

I was a bit distracted at times by the number of ..."If I had only known thens." but I liked it.
I thought the happy ending was good.

I like the ending to this though the thoughts round about their sex scene was iffy...

pretty good

No it doesn't ruin it! I love a happy ending!

I really liked this concept! Good on you!

The tense changes were a little hard to follow in the beginning, but it progressively got better until it fit perfectly with the text. I LOVED it when it fit - it was a very interesting insight. Very nice characterization and fluent prose. Cheers!

Sid

I love it! the detail and everything awesome!