Thats 2 stories i have read of yours and both end with deeks only getting wounded in the shoulder.

You have all this build up to the ending and then a piss poor ending.

I know this story a few years old and we are in n season 9 now but there been a few ppl in side OPS DEA taila ppl of the red team. There lady from the view show so you are good lol .

Enjoyed This Story! thank you!

I can relate to your sentiments about a story morphing into something else. Mine tend to write themselves.

Congratulations on completing your story. It was truly unique. This case and the personal experiences of Deeks were well thought out and defined. You captured the characters' manner of speech very well. Your perspective of the entire team is very interesting and well suited for this story. Finally your original characters are quite good. All of then are very complicatedin their on ways. Sylvia was a monster, but you gave her layer after layer of psychosis. She is an extraordinary villain. Well done.

i have enjoyed this twisted,angsty & psychological story
it was brilliant and fabulous

Awesome

What a amazing adventure you brought us on..This was one of the most suspenseful stories I have read and really enjoyed..Thank you for taking the time and sharing your talent and giving us a great story..Keep up the good work and I for one will look forward to your next NCISLA adventure..

awesome ending

As much as I hate to see this end I'm glad it ended with a bang (or three) and it's been a wild ride and I thank you for sharing it!

crazy chapter very good

*Shoves Kensi aside to hug Deeks* OMG I love this chapter. The angst is beautiful. I love the angst. Poor Deeks. *Wheee* Yeah. The more whump/angst the better. My heart is breaking for him. MORE PLEASE.

Awesome two chapters so close together. Forgot to post review to last chapter earlier

will team callen get there in time to rescue eric?
will deeks ever be able to feel safe again?
the suspense is nerve wracking?
brilliant chapter

Love the flow. Love seeing whacked out Sylvia thinking things through and doing her thing. She is truly creepy. I love it. That poor Dumb Riley. Heh. Poor Deeks. I was freaking out right along with him. Love how the team is just gathering around and supporting him. Love this story. *hugs it hard* Thanks so much for continuing this. You are made of win!