UPDATE I HAVE BEEN WAITNG FOR AN UPDATE FOR MONTHS PLEZ I NEED MORE AWESOME STORY

ps. this story is AMAZING please dont abanon it
sincely flame boom
also known as lol bug 87

This is great it really is a good story can't wait for the next chapter :D.

been a looooooong time since you've written anything new oh well hope you'll write the next chapter very soon hmm looks like shiro's getting found out hope things don't get too ugly when he reveals he's not a pony eh wishful thinking since it's obvious it will be a disaster when the truth comes out since they think he's a pony unless they'll still like him in his real form then again shiro doesn't seem to notice they got the hots for him oh well please write the next chapter as soon as you can.

Heh, pretty nice updating here.

The whole 'cutie mark' detail can reveal the whole deception since every pony knows about them.

Keep the good writing.

the weird words shiro was saying were from the wolf language in wolfs of the beyond(good books)

please write more
Rainbow Dash

Very cool chapter here. Thanks for telling me.

Keep the good writing.

didn't know the guy was working for the ice king looks like only rainbow dash,applejack,rarity,and fluttershy like him it looks that way to me you sure took a long time to write anything new i hope you won't take so long writing the next chapter please write again soon good story.

I stopped reading when you insulted my religon. You could've left that out you know? Oh well, not following this anymore!

Also, this might be useful for later reference...

SinceTwilight's brother married Cadence, Twilight is now a princess.
I didn't know if you knew or not. :)

You've got my attention...
Please continue this, I'm curious.

been a while since you've written a new chapter i almost thought you gave up on this story glad i was wrong well it seems five of the main six have fallen for shiro i wonder if twilight will too how many mares are there going to be in this harem? just the main six or will there be others like celestia luna ditzy doo? well write what happens next very soon good story.

Heh, this is a cool chapter.

Good scene with Roid Rage, and neat job with the reference to steroids (the whole drinks thing).

Keep the good writing.

i love snappa :

sounds like a pretty good story so far it looks like applejack and rarity are going to be in the harem i'm thinking the rest of the main six too but is it just going to be the main six or will there be others like the princesses? well when it comes to harem fics the more the merrier i always say please write more chapters soon.