Oh my gosh this is so cute :) I loved this

That was so sweet. thank you for writing it

Aw. :)
This is awesome. Super cute!

that's a wonderful way of explaining why Rory wanted to become a nurse and not a doctor.

I love the idea of Rory defending his (unknown & future) daughter when he was a kid himself.

Aww this was such a sweet moment. I wish it had actually happened!

Oh, I loved this so much! I can see what Mels meant in "Let's Kill Hitler" when she said that in a way, Amy and Rory did get to raise her... and it's nice to see indications of what Rory will be like in the future, what with him being a nurse/Roman soldier...

Super cute! I wish in the show it would be more like there, where Mels and Rory got along as oppose to Mels ignoring Rory.

"Justin says he's sorry." That is just too awesome for words. And mini Rory taking on the school bully is just too perfect. A nice hint of the Centurion to come.

That was sort of bittersweet and really really lovely. I loved the bit about mels telling him he should be a nurse. That was cute.
Oh and just because they're english I thought I'd say that it would be year five or year six over here, not third grade, and the word dweeb isn't british either. Runt mabye…or weakling. To be honest I'm not sure what dweeb even means I'm just guessing.

Oh my god. This is absolutely and positively GLORIOUS. I just... this was perfect and wonderful and sweet and I just love how Rory's got that pervasive knowingness throughout everything. I also loved how you had the whole father thing running through, especially with Mels carefully avoiding any hints that she knows just who her father is and just how much he loves her.

I'm just super emotional about this and I just... Ugh. This is amazing.

Eat your words, Melody Pond!

Oh! It's so sweet! Lovely! :D

Nice. Can totally see it happening. Rory always steps up when he is needed. That's why I like his character. The silent background hero.

Awwww, this was absolutely adorable! loved reading it!