Hey! This is a really great story, soooooo, if ya wouldn't mind continuing it... Well, ttyl my friend! (Even though you probably don't know me cause I'm new lol)

Sup. Jus sayin, u should update ur story rlly soon, it's awesome.

Love it! Please continue this I love still ties like this!

Hey RedHanaIchigo! You need to update this, ASAP mister! (sorry if you're a girl, no meaning to offend, and if you're a boy, I am still sorry).

This is the fucking worst story of all pokemon fanfiction history¡!you are a dumbass how do u even have a account on here!:( BITCH

what the heck just happened?! please don't tell me we have 3 dead guys here. Even if they are not the most loved I want them alive! DX But continue with your story it's fantastic

Awesome! Even though i do 'tunderstand all of it yet! Please update!

UPDATE!

Love it so much. Please keep going

ohhhhhhhh! Too bad that Brenden and Lucas would die. I actually like them if they aren't evil or anything like that. LOL. Dawn succedded in Pissing Paul off. And he didn't even say anything. XD

I can't wait until the next chapter! So update whenever you can! 8D

Oooh! Good! Update soon!

hey i really like it
hope you can write more
i'm really interested

Great bio it's really good and it's Musa lover sorry cant b bothered to sign in. I love it and please update soon I wanna no what's gonna happen And thank you for your lovely message. It made me smile :)

I like the idea. I'm really curious about this story and can't wait for more. Can you please make them all get equal time but leaf a bit more? And can misty be last to get with ash? Love the idea keep going!

I like the concept. I am very intrigued. Why are the boys trying to kill them? do they have powers? what pokemon do they have? guess i'll have to wait :)