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I like it alot! But you need to add more length so you can leave your readers satisfied! Please write more!

OMFG-this is awesome, its was short but intense...would for you to continue...can't wait till Turquoise and Jaguar's embrace

more please:)

omg! keep woking on this because I love it!

OMG! midnight dissappeared! poor turquoise, she returns there to see her love and midnight its gone! pleae write more! its so good! ,

you haven't finished this? that's just... brutal... this is one of the only Turquoise/Jaguar fics! Please have pity and update!

This is a really good first chapter. You have a bit of what the characters are like now and you have Turquoise admitting that she loves Jaguar, so Yay! Don't stop now! And keep up the good work.

so turquoise goes back to Midnight.

why'd Midnight disappear? and how did

turquoise fall for jaguar?

I liked it! Keep up the good work... what happened to midnight?

The Dragyness

sounds like a very good story and i would injoy finding out what happend i really hope that u keep working on this story but hat is up to u not me any how good luck with what every u r working on

you really need to finish this, from the description it sounds like it'll be awesome, and its a good first chapter, please continue!
~M

Where's the next chapter! Oh no, that wasn't nice! I just stepped near the edge of the cliff and you push me right off! One monster of a cliffhanger. x.x

Great first chapter. Please write more soon!

Suspense, I love writing cliffhangers but hate reading them. Impressive fic, not bad at all, there's too little Midnight Predator fics around here, where are they? Never mind, hope you update soon.