Reviews for Matchsticks |
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OptimisticLady chapter 1 . 4/1/2014 "Ready for your first raid, Longbottom?" sounds like an innuendo like they're about to invade his Long Bottom. But this was so good ashdlakjsgd and the Luna/Neville bit at the end was hella cute :3 |
shadowpuff chapter 1 . 7/27/2013 Good story. Funny too. I like how Neville gets save by Luna in the end. You captured Neville really well. Good writing style. The story flows really well. You just need to check your spacing. I can't really say anything about the spelling, because my spelling sucks. Otherwise, I love it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 I meant you haven't posted in a while, sorry. |
ThoroughlySherlocked chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 Hey there! I just found this fic, and I'm glad I did. It's really good, even if some parts are a bit OOC. Great job, continue writing! You haven't been on in a while! This fic's great, by the way. Why doesn't it have more reviews? Cheers! TS :) |