I love the quality of the story so far, but the third-person limited thing almost makes me not want to keep reading. Just a personal thing of mine.

MATHETICAL!

Awww, abandoned story is abandoned! Wonderfully written (so much better than 99% of the deal on this site), hope to see more of it soon!

Uh, this is really good, please, update faster! Then a sequel! Then update faster than that! Until you are updating so fast it rips a whole in logic and reason and send me to Ooo to become a fire elemental! Then I can either hit it on with FP or come back here an destroy everything! (Oops, I didn't mean to say that last part) BUT ALL THE SAME, UPDAYE FASTER!

(Deep breaths; in, out, in...)
Fundindar

Winter is coming... to ruin story flows. It's alright Andjuzane. In all honestly, I had my share of dissapearances througout all this time, so... I'm no one to complain about delays. And when you come and write something like Chapter 11... you made me shed a few tears and really made me wish Marceline joins into a three-way relationship, the things you've written, it hits me right there. I think it's been long established this is now into AU territory, but regardless of it, or what canon has to say, I like this: I like this because is beautiful, and I like canon because I'm hopeful, nothing ever reaches and end, right? I really like the perspective of it all, you've done well, and I apologize for the lackluster review, and I'll promise I'll give you a good one with a new chapter, like back in the old days, right? In any event, great work here.

Awesome

The Lich needs to learn when he's beat because he's trying to interfere with my OTP. No one messes with my OTP!

It took me a day to realize that this beautiful piece of art has updated. I feel so ashamed.

I've been waiting for this to update for a while now. And I've got to say, I am NOT disappointed.

Excellent job with this story so far, I am very excited for the next update!

Yeah, all of Finn's romantic prospects are just going to lead to somebody getting hurt. But, them's the breaks.

Well this is about to turn into a huge disaster.

Lot of cameos here, I like it.

I might not be into Adventure time like that, but your story is AWESOME!
If you turn it into a harem that's cool too.
Everyone deserves some happiness in their lives at some point.

Amazing are the times when 'canon' seems to validate you a bit. Have you checked 'Candy Capers', needless to say, I can understand why PB would worry about the kingdom if Finn isn't around...

Yep. Totally favoriting and subscribing to this awesomesauce. :D