Reviews for Betrayal |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 5 . 2/18 Hmm, he could have said electrocution and they could assume either way , or even that he doesn't remember much of the insistent |
YukinaBlueRose chapter 8 . 11/3/2019 I like it! ! ! ! O:D |
Jacob Phantom chapter 8 . 6/3/2019 Please update your story soon! |
SofiPhan29 chapter 8 . 4/25/2019 It was a good ending. It cracked me a smile ;3 |
MindForgedMan chapter 5 . 2/15/2019 God the writing of this story is awful. |
LK2 chapter 8 . 1/5/2018 Thanks for the story and please keep up the good work (-) |
HTTYDGuest chapter 7 . 9/18/2017 -O Batman . . . . APOLOGIZED?! *Faints from shock* |
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 8 . 9/1/2017 Great! Love Flash's commentary and your depiction of Wonder Woman's compassionate nature. Shayera goes by Hawkgirl, not Hawk Woman. |
Phanten chapter 8 . 5/16/2017 Good story, just a bit blunt though |
Onlylittle63 chapter 8 . 4/28/2017 Great story, probably read this twice, but sorry to say it, crap ending. You had a good thing going, but then snap you ended it. No development, and now he considers a bunch of adults that are interrogating them family after his trust was shattered by his parents? Sorry, but I call f*cking bullsh*t. Add more character development and more relationship and plot development, make something happen. An interrogation is in fact not a way people heal. He needs to gain a sense of trust. And how did Skulker get Dani? You have a great idea, but add more, fix plot holes, them bam fantastic short story. (We don't even get to see him use the training room. That's my favorite part in these ;-;) |
Guillermo Riers chapter 8 . 4/11/2017 continue. you have a good thing going. |
Guillermo Riers chapter 2 . 4/11/2017 I feel your pain sister. I too have braces and they're a pain in the ass |
Thebananathatwrites chapter 8 . 4/5/2017 I'm laughing too much at Flash I love it XD |
Killua Lawliet chapter 3 . 3/20/2017 Love this but its J'ohn J'onzz not Jo'hn Jon'zz and the Gost Zone is green w/ purple doors other than thouse two things though great story I really love ur work |
orca3553 chapter 8 . 3/18/2017 when batman is smiling you run for your life, that is a rule, or at least it should be one |