Thoroughly enjoyed your retake on New Moon. Gave us a whole new insight into the Volturi. I'm glad Bella became such a strong confident vampire. Great story.

The italian is atrocious. no effort in it whatsoever.
"Come si dice?" means "What does it mean?". "Sicuro?" when talking to a female needs to be changed to the feminine formSicura?". "Keep it" translates to "Tienilo" not "Tenere il".

You could have just written "She asked me X in Italian" and it would have been fine. If you're going to write a second language in the story, make sure it's accurate.

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I was pleased to read this entire fiction and I loved it. It is perfect for someone who loves vampire stories.
I am French from Montpellier. Right now, in confinement for 3 weeks, I have a lot of free time.
Thanks for the entertainment.

Great story! I couldn’t stop reading it till the end... I wish there were more chapters :)
I especially like the ending, it suited the story really well

Great read. Thanks for sharing.

I really wish you would write more vampire fics. I don't read ah, my life is hard I need escapism lol. great fic

I loved this story. When I first began reading this I really didn’t expect the story to unfold the way it did. It was so unique and you did an incredible job with it. I somehow wish their was some more closure with the Cullens though but I think that’s just because I’m so used to the Cullen’s being part of most fan fictions haha. Anyways thanks for sharing

this was a great story thank u for sharing

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us. I didn't like this Isabella, but I enjoyed reading about her.

Maybe Adriana will take down Bella.

I guess there's no turning back. I was really hoping that Isabella would somehow redeem herself and go back to being humane.

Truly sad to see how the events have harden Isabella. She's bitter, she's cold and doesn't care who she hurts.

Smh

I wonder if they wish they could go back in time.

What's going on with Edward? Why hasn't the Cullens intervened?