I wish we could have known what was so damn important to derek he was so tensed over. buuuuuut at the same time knowing probably just would have went against the grain of the story. a delightful story

Awesome story, and for me it was porn-y enough :) Thanks!

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So, you say you cant write "carefree, off-the-cuff smutty oneshots"?
Wow, if this is crappy writing, I definitely want to read some good stuff because to me, not only is this really well written, its incredibly hot. Like steaming hot. Like I kind of want to read it again and go die in a corner. That good. I read your newest one, Blood and Fire, and that is also really hot, and I'm excited for a new installment of said story. Don't make me wait too long, I'm famished! xD Anyway, you're fabulous, keep doing what you're doing please!

Unlike your what your author's note said, I thought you wrote that piece well. Can you write a story where it's actually Stiles and Derek? Maybe Stiles could be totally drunk and wants to slip behind Derek and give him an unexpected back massage. I can see Derek totally tensing up and being rude but then giving in and enjoying himself. ;) Just a thought. Well done

Holy shit. Panting. Dying. SO GOOD.

-Tarryn

Dear fucking me, I think i just turned into a pile of goo. Good lord, please write more.

OH this is so hot. I love it. Wow. Smokin

Lol well this was really good

Awesome one-shot. I enjoyed it a lot.

I think you did a pretty darn good job,,,:)

2nd part?

"A/N: Once again, I have proven I can't write porn. OH WELL"

Are you fucking kidding?! That was awesome! and HOTT! (or maybe you're just angling for sympathy votes. hmm ;))