I really enjoyed this story so far!
I really hope you return to it someday to continue this as it is really well written!

Good story.
I hope you feel like updating.

Me: You Updated!

Authors Note

Me: Nooooo!

Great story so far! Just a comment: You seem to capitalize letters whenever you feel like it. Capital letters should only be used at the beginning of a sentence or for a proper noun.

All I can say is: way ta go Bahiti! Amazing story so far.

Woah... Crazy. I'd hate to be the uncle right then. O.O

loved it.

I don't know why but I'm just loving your Zelda references I find them hysterical.

"Greeeat! Now I really do feel like Link with an even more annoying version of Navi" was a totally awesome line and too funny for words.

I couldn't stop laughing at the line "Woah! I look like I have Link's ears off The Legend of Zelda!" love it!

Finally a Jamie-Guardian story! Abd a great one aswell!

Pitch is coming back? Oh that is not good at all. This is really good story. Okay the flute is making more and more sense. Please bring Tinker Bell in the future she was always Peter's companion it wouldn't be the same without her. I'm enjoying this tremendously keep it up.

I love how your intertwining all these different movies and fairy tales!
And I love how you brought in Jack Sparrow!

HOLY CROSSOVER MAGIC

Awesome, I like your how you've taken story's people read everyday and made them unique. Turning Jamie into Peter Pan is a very new and fun idea. And throughing in everyone's favorite Captine just makes it all the better. I hope to see more of your work soon. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us.

Ha ha this is cool. It's interesting that Peter and Hook are getting along right now. I'm thinking Will is supposed to be Will and Elizabeth's son but I could be wrong. Nifty idea there. I can see Jack having trouble in warm weather good thing you thought of something to cure that. I like how you portray Hook his personality is well brought out tell me is he supposed to be somewhat like Jack Sparrow in anyway with all that rum drinking? Or perhaps not. Eh either this is good so far. Can't wait to read more.

This chapter was awesome. Captain Jack Sparrow is being tied in. That'll be fun, I can't wait to see more. SO HURRY UP AND UPDATE!