Remember to capitalize the beginning of every sentence. Don't forget to use commas! When Tsunade says "yea can I watch sailor moon?", she should really be saying "Yeah, can I watch Sailor Moon?"

Sailor Moon is capitalized because it's a title.

Otherwise, cute story. I'm a big fan of deaging.

I can't wait till the next chapter I wonder if tsunade will remember her little experience.

Keep writing more chapters This stuff is great

Wow I really like where this story is going great job ;)

Well one thing to answer your questions just keep reading

Please watch the run on sentences. And you need to remember to capitolize the beginnings of sentences. Otherwise, I like your plot. Chibi Tsunade is cute! I want to see Jiraiya's reaction to his love's de aging. Will Tsunade get her memories back when she gets older? How will she age if there was no antidote?