Reviews for Through her eyes |
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gummy b3ars chapter 2 . 3/5/2016 Loved it |
biofan09 chapter 2 . 1/11/2015 Not bad for a first story. It was short yet very sweet. Biggest problem would be the spelling and grammar errors. For example, in the 5th sentence of the 1st paragraph of the 2nd chapter, you forgot to add pronouns (It should be: When HE became older, HE realized...). Don't let that get you down though, the story was more than legible overall. |
hiNAru Aburame chapter 2 . 4/26/2013 Awww i love it! Greetings! n_n |
kiuibi123 chapter 2 . 3/16/2013 KYAHHHH!KIWAIII! gahh i love fluff. |
Arcane Azmadi chapter 2 . 12/16/2012 Not a bad little short. You need to double check your grammar, though and seriously, "teme" is NOT a proper noun. But a nice sweet little story. |
Lord Farsight chapter 2 . 12/15/2012 Simple, sweet, faved. |