| Reviews for To fall and to fly |
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  anon chapter 1 . 3/2/2018 wow, this was amazing! and that last line was so out of left field (in a way that left in an impact, not in a negative way), yet it really added something incredible to this! tysm for sharing |
 Jun Wu Xie X Jun Wu Yao Lover chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 Woah! You need to make this a series! |
| TooLazyToLogin chapter 1 . 6/2/2017 That last line, man! That last line. It was all so sweet and simple, then it ends with ice to the heart. Beautifully done. |
| Samantha2611 chapter 1 . 2/12/2017 Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. |
| CrazyGirl1023 chapter 1 . 2/9/2017 there should totally be more to this because it's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD |
| Biancachu chapter 1 . 1/30/2016 The descriptions were beautiful and the ending-Ouch! That was the sound of a crack in my heart. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2015 OH, you killed me with that last sentence. |
| slumberingscribe chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Both beautiful and poetic. Really enjoyed reading this |
| Wildrop chapter 1 . 7/14/2014 Ouch. Very, very pretty, though. Thank you for the rather beautiful description! |
| yamiduke13 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 This was just too great. I really enjoyed reading it and the last line made me awww. |
| paracuties chapter 1 . 5/6/2014 Whoa. That last sentence was - well. Unexpected. Really kind of eye-opening, though; I never thought about it that way and to put that sort of mood in this...really good. You have some serious talent. Keep writing! |
| Auua Ytjoml chapter 1 . 4/24/2014 Wow! A great drabble with some keen insight. And very sad. It reminds me of a much darker version of the saying "meddle not in the affairs of dragons for you are tasty and good with ketchup" that is, that which seems beautiful, unearthly, and exciting is just as likely to be something dark and undesirable as it is to be a wonderful adventure. |
| WildFireBurnsTheForest chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 Oh god, you've skied me. That last sentence was so shocking I squeaked so loud my parents freaked out! The last sentence just broke my heart. Here I thought it'd be some cute little musing about Bunny thinking Jack was just crazy balanced and then you pull that out at the end and shatter my soul. I just want you to know you've left me crying... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2014 The last semtence almost broke my heart! Oh, but its so beautiful; how this fic was written! |
| babyblue3752 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013 Oh, this is beautiful! |
