Reviews for Zero Hour
PatheticJoker chapter 5 . 1/20
Nice Job again. I'm really hoping End of an Era reaches all the way through ME3, but I've really enjoyed your work regardless.
GreenFire chapter 5 . 12/19/2017
Hey LuxDragon, hope you'll still be able to see my review!

Just finished reading Zero Hour last night. Well done! It's the right prep and cutoff for your ME3 novelization.

If it's anything to you, I encountered Fight For the Lost early this year, but wasn't able to finish it (must've stopped around Ch. 30-40, I can't remember) because of the academics and other stuff - but yep, I'm an engineer now! Anyway, I went back to reading it in November, all the way from chapter 1. Then Legacy of the Shadow Broker, then this one. Hah! I think I'm satisfied, but I'm very happy that your ME3 novelization is still ongoing. I have been a Fanfiction reader for a long time, and to be honest, there are only so few bearable stories here. With regards to Mass Effect, your story is the best. To the point that I think, everyone who has played the game should read your stories!

I've to say though, some parts lack feeling. Maybe it's just me, but there are parts where I think the emotional part could be upped a little more. For one, when the 300000~ batarians were about to be obliterated, I would expect Shepard to begin feeling the weight of THAT while on the mission. It's right there after he's back in the Normandy, but I did remember (as a player) feeling so conflicted while in the mission, which just got worse when the Admiral got into the ship. Just saying ) It's not bad at all, just my opinion. I absolutely love your stories! Thanks so much for writing them.
torexile chapter 5 . 9/25/2017
I enjoyed reading this. Almost as good as the game.
There is one thing: I read halfway through this chapter and it said that mirandas LIPS furrowed. (Shouldn't that be like a brow?) just saying.
On to your next story I go!
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 4 . 9/2/2016
Remember to youtube for
mass effect 2 arrival the beginning of the end
for the final 2 pieces.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 2 . 9/2/2016
I got a dark knight flashback
Warden Valdr chapter 5 . 11/10/2015
An epic and brilliantly paced novelization of the Arrival DLC. It was like reading a Mathew Reilly novel. A more solo adventure for Shepard but you really upped him into a one man army. Another great story and a fitting lead up into ME3. I can't wait!
creativesm75 chapter 5 . 10/30/2015
very good.
KingRamses chapter 5 . 7/6/2015
Yo this was my favorite mission in the game ave you've don't great justice to it...another masterful work
ANARCHY RULES chapter 5 . 6/25/2014
This was a great story. I loved the scene in the last chapter where Shepard discharges the crew.
bluemarlin chapter 5 . 6/22/2014
Wonderful ending to this story. Looking forward to reading your next one.
Zacharti chapter 5 . 6/3/2014
I'm so excited with your next fics !
Janizary chapter 5 . 6/2/2014
Nice 'red slipper' reference dropped in there.

And looking forward to the next in the storyline. You, sir, have, and continue to be, my FF reference author for ME. Hand down.
Janizary chapter 4 . 6/2/2014
Once again, love the Normandy-side of this story. Great to see what was going on whilst Shepard was traipsing about :D
Jozern chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
Awesome. I cannot wait for the start of End of an Era. Hype trusters activated.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
A beautiful end. I can't wait for your mass effect 3 novelization! Your the best!
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