Chouette histoire, j'espère pouvoir lire la suite un jour :)

You got a few things in here that needs to be changed, for example, "Finalist" it's Fanalis and you keep on switching from Jane to Jade. But other than that its good.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Let there be sexiness!

Hello! I love the basis of your plotline and was just wondering whether the second girl from Earth is named Jane or Jade.

Hope you update soon! love this!

Love your story! Hope you update soon!

Vivement la suite

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. You need to problem rewrite this chapter since to me the spelling is a bit hard to understand.

I ship Ja'far and Alice. Please update as soon as you can

are you not finishing this? if so that is sad i really love it, not many are writing in this style.

Please write some more. I want to know what happens. Heck there's a lot that I want to know.

confused- is your OC's name Jane or Jade?

I ship Jafar and Alice...you should make them a couple eventually lol. But please update again soon I can't wait to read more!

Interesting. Keep it up! :)

Too short nooooo please update I love this out of all magi stories