Reviews for Aegis |
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amicaricia10 chapter 2 . 9/15/2013 Lovely! |
Different Child chapter 2 . 8/23/2013 eughilhge. Interesting. T_T_T So...we will get to see Jinora actually go to Uni? That'd be pretty amazing. ( If it's just a 'quick' story I admit I'll be a little disappointed because you're so good! But we'll see! |
Jojo chapter 2 . 2/10/2013 Love it update soon please |
JackieStarSister chapter 2 . 1/22/2013 This is excellent, and looks very promising! I too have thought that Jinora would want to go to a university, and the only one we've heard of in that world is in Ba Sing Se, so it would make sense for her to go. I really liked seeing Ikki's thoughts about her sister and how she's grown up. If I might offer a suggestion, maybe label the first chapter "Prologue" or "Preface", and/or begin each chapter with a chronological label. Good luck with this! |
dailymantra chapter 2 . 1/5/2013 This is absolutely beautiful and I can't wait to see where it goes. I really enjoy how you portray older Jinora and I know I'm going to love seeing more of how she plays out as a character. Flawless. 10/10 |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012 This hurts. |