please update. i want to see how they do at the amusement park.

Hopefully you won't be long updating this I have really enjoyed it so far

I'm guessing ken showed darien serena's baby pictures

Honey I've read most of the sailor moon stories on this site and I've got to say yours is one of my favorite but you got to update more chapters can't leave me hanging with the date so please update another chapter

I have just read all the chapters. Your story is fantastic. I can't wait to read more! I hope you can up more chapters soon. I want to read more and I want a kiss between Dare-bear and Meatball's Head.

hey, I've just read all 14 chapters and can't wait to read more...get to writing! ;). I actually think I like it better then the show(cartoon sailor moon) I always thought it wasn't fair that the boys, aka: the generals, didn't get the chance at a real life so it's nice to see them here getting a chance and it's nice to read about the girls hooking up with them in this life time too. I can't wait to here more about them and Darian getting to realize who they really are. thanks for writing this story and please finish it.

This is a great story! (I'm just getting caught up on SMFF due to the blizzard we're experiencing.) How come it is labelled "complete"? Hope you will continue it soon. Thanks so much for sharing it.

I just started reading your story and I noticed that it was marked complete I you continue because I would to see the other generals get their powers and to see Usagi and Mamoru's relationship develop.

So glad to see the update! I reread the whole thing and enjoyed it just as much - maybe more - the second time through. I love your development of Usagi and Ken's interactions.

You give uneven attention to each of the senshi, but I think that is a good thing. It allows you to truly develop the characters you do focus on and prevents your story from feeling horribly formulaic as so many fan fictions often do.

Want more Mamoru! And would love to see more interactions with Ken and the guys. That side of things looks like it has lots of potential.

Hope to see another update!

Happy Writing!

Im so sad :( I want another chapter but this hasn't been updated in awhile if your still writing please...The story is so good

Oh no! It's not finished!

I have really enjoyed what you have so far! Your plot development is well paced and well put together. I like your development of Kunzite and his relationship with Serena. And the development of Serena and Darien has been delightful as well.

I'm hoping you haven't given up on this. Goodness knows, it has on one or two occasions taken me over a year to update.

Nice work in any case!

This is not the ending? Its been almost a year sinces u ladr updated it.. please update an give me a better ending then a cliff hanger... thanks :) also I really like your stories :) have a good night

Hope you update soon!

You have a great story going!

please update