Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read.

I've read your oneshot again, and I can't resist commenting it once more.
I loved that we got to see the domestic side of Jane and Lisbon's relationship; even though she's angry at him because she's going to be late for work, I'm sure he turned off her alarm clock with the best intentions.
(And I so wish I could get to see her with the emerald green shirt, she would be definitely gorgeous!)
It's so sweet that he leaves breakfast in her office, along with a note to make sure she eats it; even more so because she actually does, no matter if her stomach isn't entirely happy about it.
And it's kind of amusing that - as boring her meeting is - it's probably what allows Jane to propose to her. I truly loved it when he gave her his old wedding band along with another message, and that after he's done it he can finally say the words we've been waiting to hear for so long.
I so wish I could get to see Jane's face when Lisbon eventually shares her little surprise with him; that's another thing I particularly liked, the fact that you hinted at it throughout the whole fic without explicitly mentioning it.
They are the lucky ones indeed, as am I for receiving such a beautiful gift. It really made my day, which would have been utterly dull otherwise.
Thanks again, my dear!

I love that he gave her his old ring. The note explaining that was beautiful.

Aww! I loved that last bit, especially where he gave her his ring with the note about her needing to take care of this piece of his heart. So, so sweet. Especially with all they've been through.

And I'm guessing she's pregnant, judging by the asides about her touching her belly?

So glad you're back and writing again. I hope you're doing well, and that the migraines aren't giving you as much grief as they have in the past. If you can, let me know how you are. And please write more soon. :)

That was sweet, she is pregnant isn't she?
Please post chapter 10 asap.

What a succinct and yet emotionally devastating way to write Jane's story.

Brings home just how much he needed to find Lisbon and how much he will always need her.

I really enjoyed this, especially the hopeful and beautiful ending.

Nice the little surprise ;)

Well, you may write less fanfics than you used to...but it's still worth the wait !

Love how Jane take care of Lisbon, of her sleep and her eating patterns.
The proposal is the most beautiful proposal anyone could dream of...giving her his wedding band shows how much he trusts her, and the words are so perfect ! Now the date will be associated with a happy memory,the first one of many...yes, they're the lucky ones, even if Jane doesn't know how much yet...

I truly love it. It's very moving !

I love this! Hearing Patrick's thought process from the beginning in this poetic style (which I myself would gravitate to for writing & reading) makes it all so much more clear. He probably did go thru a couple of suicide attempts before being in the mental hospital. His reasoning for going to the CBI makes better sense now with your words. I loved how it ended.
These one-shots and Ricochet are the first stories of yours I have read, being new to this site. I find your writing very intelligent and well done and will be reading many more. You are prolific! Thank you!

I wish they would adopt your line idea that "she's already saved him once." It would make a very interesting episode if they'd met when he was in the worst of it, but he didn't remember. If she'd known him longer than he's known her.

This was such an interesting way to write, but I really loved it!

You writing style here really looks like domino, falling one after another...in a determined order. And yet it matches Jane's troubled mind...It's very disturbing (in a positive kind of way).

Aw Tracie.

I read this only now because up until recently, I hadn't seen neither 5x21 nor 5x22, therefore I wanted to avoid spoilers. But I did wonder about how Lisbon had broken her wrist. You had such a simple, yet beautiful way of explaining it. I really enjoyed reading the backstory behind this, and I think you led really nicely into talking about Lisbon's wrist, by talking about all the other injuries.

Brilliant work, as always.

xxx Grace.

I'm guessing this is just after Red John had his way with Jane's family. So tragic. I love the illusions you used here, the carnival and being lost and feeling like he has to keep going. This was written magnificently.