A deal is not a deal if both parties aren't aware of the deal. I wouldn't pay up either! Loved your I interpretation of Pegasus style Alice in Wonderland.

brilliant story

Well, at least it wasn't clowns...;)

That was really well done, and I liked it a lot, thank you!

So this is my third attempt to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. I wanted to say that I hope you will post any other of your SGA stories here, too.
Hope this one gets posted!

My review didn't show up, but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this interesting story. So well done. I hope you have other older stories that you can post.

This was terrific. Such an interesting concept. You caught the interaction between McKay and Sheppard so well. Thanks for posting I hope you have other gems like this hidden away that you can share.

Nice interaction between Rodney and John...weird but great story! Glad all is well in the end!

Weird! So Sheppard 's nightmares come true?! Nice one for Radek! Now he will have soemthing over Rodney...saving his ornery would have died in the nightmare, right?
Is this like what happen to Heightmeyer in Doppelgänger episode? What is this place!?

Fun ride! You did a great job.

June

wow nice wrap as long as your not mckay with the offered lemmon crisp powerbars :)

well at least he can get help now :)

oh that dont seem good now they will have a mob chasing and yelling after them lol :)

hummm i wonder why things keep conveniently turning up for sheppard :)

wow that cant be good.

Excellent tie-up of the loose ends... all except those glass doorknobs. Unfortunately, John wasn't conscious enough to see them, or he might escape the payment entirely, because *everything* wasn't *entirely* his fault!

Great work with the characters' voices throughout the story; I could hear their voices as I read. I'll look forward to more of your work!