C-can’t breathe *wheeze*
My stomach still hurts from laughing. The ‘I’ve gotta go tell the Hokage everything!’ plot line is majorly overused, and this story did a great job to put it out in the light.

Rereading this always makes me laugh. Good job!

I feel so bad for them, but it makes so much sense. Hehe...

Holy shit dude this has got to be the most interesting premise of a self-insert fanfic ever. I am so excited to see where you take this story! Keep up the good work!

This is gold! Plus I can recognize some OCs from other fanfics in there, yay .

This is so perfect! Seriously, why do these people have saviour complexes? Just do your own shit. And the Hokage is not someone that can be trusted to do the 'right' thing. I like how this addresses some of the cliches in the SIOC trope. Thanks for sharing!

This is beauty.

When you're one of the ones who would've just shut up and gone to civilian school.

Lololololol
Love it.

I love this, uhm, can you make more? I would looove to read more because it's just too damn true I i want, ehem, I would appreciate more. :)

Then I'd be that one Self Insert who actually doesn't tell anyone swat. I just a observe and be one of those weird smart quiet kids.

Oh God, those poor naive girls! XD

Hilarious, and perfectly represents SI-Fics these days

this is amazing

It should have finished with a thing about how after the fourth war they breakout of the ward and just shout 'we told you so!' To the world... But meh.

You should continue this OMG xD
Then write about how all these girls saved the world or sth :D