| Reviews for Of Minds and Memories |
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   skigirl51 chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 Cool! |
| RandominatorOwl chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 Very nice! |
| nancyozz chapter 1 . 9/8/2014 I think this is one of the best one shots I've ever read. Love how you really understood the importance that Pepper is to Tony... So many avengers fanfics make her a glorified babysitter or co worker or just a footnote ...when really she is his main reason for being and you got that and wrote it brilliantly. You really wrote Tony so well that you should feel very proud. |
| llbnst chapter 1 . 12/22/2013 Great story |
| Jesters of the Moon chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 This was incredible. I absolutely loved every second of reading this; everyone is perfectly in character and the plot was very interesting. -Jesters of the Moon |
| TaecMin chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 Awesome story :) |
| Jelsemium chapter 1 . 2/17/2013 This is a great story! So few fan fics have decent fights in them and you had two! I also like how you handled Tony. I thought it made sense that he would be able to fight a DoomBot because of what he learned by making his armor. I suggest getting a beta reader, because there are places where you mixed up your tenses: “he reaches out a bandaged hand - 'strange, I thought I'd hurt my head' - and poked her knee.” Also, it gets confusing when you put one person’s actions on the same line as another person’s words. For example: "Of course you do." Tony grinned at him, unrepentant. "Hey, whatever gets the job done Capsicle. What now?" It's easier to follow if you put the person’s actions and words on the same line: "Of course you do." Tony grinned at him, unrepentant. "Hey, whatever gets the job done Capsicle. What now?" Back to the things I liked: Loved that Doom didn’t get away! I also enjoyed reading your dialog. Looking forward to more stories from you! |
| Harm Marie chapter 1 . 2/14/2013 Liked this. |
| Imalena chapter 1 . 2/14/2013 Wow, really nice story, I'm glad you took the time to make it look real! |
| Dog of Matter chapter 1 . 2/14/2013 Amazingly pulled off and written, just like all of your stories are. I felt so happy for reading this, I'm feeling the emotions! Thanks again! |
| julliet15 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 Tony is soooo in character and the details/style of this story is absolutely amazing. No wonder AvengerGal added it to our community. |
| Post U Later chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 Holy Shit! Fury Said 'Please!' & He Even Semi-Complimented Tony! "Don't let anyone call you stupid." That Is Amazing! I Bet Tony'll Bring That Back Up As Blackmail At Some Later Date. XD I Love That Natasha Hugged Tony, It Makes Her Seem More... Human: It Humbles Her. ;P I Really Liked This Story. You Did A Great Job! X3 |
| Red Tigress chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 BWAAAA. THIS WAS EXCELLENT. *counts the perfect things* Pepperony feels! And awkward Steve feels! So great! And you painted such a great picture with the subtleties of his amnesia. BLERG, this was just so fantastic. |
| Qweb chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 Full of action and emotion. Awesome story. Thanks. |
| StoopdFoxx chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 W0W! Thank you so much for writing this! You are really good at gripping a reader in! You really made this your own didn't you! :D Some parts were surprising, but I guess that it's a good thing if things are unexpected. You are a magnificent writer and I hope you continue to write more! :P Ohh and...ummm...I don't know Aladdin well enough to spot the reference. 0 |
