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   05xRi-chanx27 chapter 2 . 8/8/2014 Ahhhh.. I loved this! But I seriously fell in love with the bathroom scene.. The hair play, the kiss, everything! It was awesome! And I love Yamamoto's dominating spirit in it! Beauty! Thanks for this! T'was so cute! |
| Misses Tsundere chapter 2 . 2/15/2014 awwwwwww sooooo cuuuuute :) |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 2 . 6/4/2013 Aww... nice words, Yamamoto! Hey! I don't know about this view! Anyway... NICE! ;D |
| NanaliJoci chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Yup it was good this second part. Takeshi is quite persuasive. He took his time in caring for Yama's wound that was nice of him. |
| NanaliJoci chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 Finally it's been a long time since I read 8059. They will forever be my favorite OTP! It's cute that Gokudera came for Yamamotos game, this shows he cares. |
| puruku chapter 2 . 5/30/2013 Love how in the end Yamamoto asks his teammates to get along with Gokudera :) |
| JustPlainMemories chapter 2 . 5/29/2013 Haha! I like Yamamoto's ending line :) It was good to read from Yama-kun's POV :) There were a few spelling mistakes- you probably missed them when you were editing [happens to me all the time as well :( ] You got his character perfectly- though I honestly think Yamamoto is much easier than writing Gokudera XP Anyway, good job. Keep it up |
| JustPlainMemories chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 I rarely ever come across fics written in the first POV... I definitely liked the change lol. You definitely got Gokudera's personality spot on . I really love this story, It was definitely cute all on it's own :) 8059 is one of my favorite pairings hahaha Well, I'm off to the next chapter :) I wanna see Yama-kun's side of the story XD |
| FallenxLinkin chapter 2 . 5/29/2013 It's good to know the sides of the characters .. I like it :) |
| puruku chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Oh yes please do! I would love to read Yamamoto's p.o.v. :) And I really did enjoy it! |
| FallenxLinkin chapter 1 . 2/28/2013 I enjoyed to the fullest! :) |
| Blinded-by-Truth chapter 1 . 2/26/2013 Hey hey! 8059 is so one of my fave KHR pairings. This is so cute! You should so write it from Yama-chan's POV. |
| tetsia.howard chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 This was soooo sweet. Definitely wanna see this from Takeshi's pov. This was amazing. :D |
| soemone chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 That was cute! I normally don't like stories from first Person view, but this one was good! |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 Aww... this is good! XDD Hayato really take care Yamamamoto! I thought Yamamoto can/will be healed with sun flame IF this not AU. But Normal treatment is really good too! Especially by Hayato! *grinned* |
