Dis is goo d

I hate that you make Wonderland and Alice look like bad things. I had watched it yesterday and this is making me a little angry. But...I still like this story

Ur story brought me to tears. It made me so sad. But I loved it. I still don’t know why it makes me sad. But it also made me happy.

Ahhhh. Now I remember. This story made me sad but happy. Poor Alice didn’t have a family. It’s from Alice in wonderland. Thats why it made me sad. But it was great story.

I knew it. I did this before. But I didn’t add it to my reread section. Strange.

I swear I read this story before.

I loved it

First, I loved that chapter second I was confused the. I was like. Awesome. I would heave liked it more though if it were longer.

U know the pumpkin head is the King right? I also just finished watching the Grand Magic Games too so...also is that the best u could come up with a name for Lucy? Also u just kind of copied the first magic games but I know it is hard to come up with that kind of stuff but still.

Yep the characters are waaaaaaaaaaaaay OOC

No offense or anything but these characters are so OOC and the chapters are a little short and every thing is going a bit to fast. But other wise it’s pretty good.

Did u copy that from Alice in Wonderland? Also why did u change her name? I feel like kicking her in the teeth for saying shit like that about FairyTail because I just finished watching an episode of the Grand Magic Games.

This is my very first fan fiction and I absolutely love it

U tha best auther eva

Lucy is so smart beautiful and tough I love her and love the book also