Reviews for You Are Mine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Gray was wearing an apron. I love how he chose to go out with Lyon. I love the pairing Lyon/Gray! They are so cute and adorable together! I love the interaction between Lyon and Gray. I love bottom Gray! I loved the lemon, it was so hot! I wish there were more fanfiction stories with the pairing Lyon/Gray. I love the pairing Natsu/Jellal! They are so cute and adorable together! love bottom Jellal! I love the interaction between Natsu and Jellal. I wish there were more fanfiction stories with Jellal as bottom. Gray, Jellal, Lyon, and Loke are all my favorite characters! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it. |
![]() ![]() I am dying Omg this is hella amazing |
![]() ![]() Holy shit! That was awesome AF |
![]() ![]() It was awesome so turned on it was amazing to see two conflicting personalities like gray and Lyon in such a beautiful and intimate relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yummm! |
![]() ![]() HOLY SHITU! i can not believe i read all of this and only in two the line "This time... your mine."That was very unexpected of Lyon i thought that he liked Juvia in this damn was i wrong! Well keep up the good work...hmm oh uh hey guys! gray:WHAT THE FUCK?! WHY DID THEY DO THIS?! Lyon: MORE IMPORTANTLY WHY ARE YOU READING THIS HUH!? Lucy,Wendy,Gajeel,Natsu,Happy,Lily,Carla & Erza:...!? Me:OK, i have to come clean to all of you's. My ships are Natsu x Lucy, Gray x Lyon, Erza x Jelal, Happy x Carla, this is my friendship ship because we are friends: I'm friends with lily,Gajeel x Levy & Wendy x Romeo. I AM SORRY BUT COME ONE EVERYONE WHO LOVES YOU GUYS SHIPS THESE SHIPS EXCEPT FOR ME AND LILY WERE JUST FRIENDS OK NOW I NEED TO RUN BEFORE YOU'S COME TO KILL ME!*STARTS RUNNING AND TH OTHERS EXCEPT FOR EVERYONE EXCEPT LYON, GRAY & GAJELL* OTHERS:HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Me: GOODBYE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
![]() ![]() While I think Natsu should have been uke ( in all of his 5'3 glory ) this was still well done. |
![]() ![]() OMG WTF was this. I LOVED it. I blushed a lot reading this because it was so beautiful. It was weird, amazing, disgusting, and beautiful. Arigato (Thank you) you just made my day. :) |
![]() ![]() I never know that this was a ship in the fairy tail fanfict. world. I really did like it no I loved it it was so good, really good for your 2nd chapter. Thank you. You made my day. :) |
![]() ![]() What the bell was this, omg. This was the most weirdest thing I have ever read. With that being said I really did love it like I LOVED the other chapters. Thanks for making my day. :) |
![]() ![]() This was so cuuuute. I loved it so much that I almost cried. All 4 chapters were b-e-a-utiful. Thanks for making my day. :) |
![]() ![]() DAWW |
![]() ![]() Keep writing more! This is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute! I don't really ship Jellal x Natsu, but this was nice! Also, the Gray x Lyon was perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is so good! i now ship jellal x natsu, and i have you to thank! |