Its kinda complicted to follow bur I really liked the idea and how the characters were intertwined by their bloody smiles. Cool story but very sad.

My god! I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH YOUR WORKS! You're amazing! Keep writing!

A really good first chapter

Wow...it was so emotional. I sobbed while reading it, I mean, I just couldn't control myself, it's just...pure emotions. It took me a while to realize what you did, I think it would've been better if you put those lines, to mark where one tragedy ends and another begins. But except that...I have nothing else to say. It's just...beautiful. And the beginning, and the ending...it was so magical. Really, honestly, I think it's beautiful :)

WOW. Beautifully written, beautifully tied together, a truly amazing piece of work. Thank you so much for writing this. I loved it. All of it. GOSH DANG, PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING, YOU GENIUS.

This was really, really good! They were long enough to illicit serious emotion, and yet short enough that it didn't get overbearing. This is really something special :). You've got talent.
The only thing I would say is for you to perhaps put line-breaks between each scene. Apart from that, amazing!