Reviews for Best Laid Plans
Max and Fern 4ever chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
I jyst reread this during season 7 and it is even better now in that perspective.
Really good!
ucialum85 chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Your words are so beautiful. Please write more Densi fan fiction please!
RhondaLara chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
WOW!
xIAmAlsoAWe chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This was just so beautiful. I love everything you write. *sigh*
callmesandy chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I liked this! :)
krazykitkat chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Gorgeous words. Beautiful imagery and subtlety. Particularly adore:
'It's located in the understanding that the world seldom makes sense, but somehow they are perfect for each other; in how together they are an answer, a truth, rather than a question or consequences.'
As a reader, thank you for making me comprehend rather than just skim.
anonkp chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Impressively written. I think you captured well how their relationship has evolved over time.
imahistorian chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
This was just beautiful. I love that it transcends more than an episode, that it covers a relationship and who they are to each other in layers upon layers. I love the touch of just a little alliteration here: "reconnaissance to a kind of remembering" and the outright here: "allegedly arbitrary assignment." It gives a wonderful flow and cadence. I did very much enjoy it, thanks for sharing!
thepixiesmademedoit chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Absolutely fantastic! You write the most wonderful and uniquely expressive pieces and this is no exception. Great job.
Fictionista 48 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I have no words. Nothing else need ever be written to describe the feelings and interactions between these two. You've captured every emotion and every nuance. This was pure magic, incredibly prosaic, intelligently written, and absolutely poetic. There are too many incredible lines to quote here. Lines that took my breath away with their genius. Perfection. Just perfection.
Lizicia chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
This is beautiful. I think that stories without dialogue are sometimes the hardest to write because you have to captivate the readers' interest with descriptions and details and hold it and you have managed to do exactly that. I love your language, the words you use and how you show their entire relationship through what they've been through together, how they've been there for each other. I especially love the part about 'I love you' in a thousand variations; while I cannot quite pinpoint the reason, it resonated within me. Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful.