And that makes me so sad, why Wesker? What the hell am I saying its Wesker. So what is going to happen now I wonder? I hope you update this soon.

-Auktober

Well I am enjoying the Sheva and Wesker moments. They like and maybe even love one another. I see that you haven't updated in a long while. I hope that you haven't abandoned this story :( It's a joy to read. Please don't give up I promise to review every chapter if you continue it. Well I hope you update soon.

-Auktober

Oh I am so loving the Wesker/Sheva interaction. The chemistry between them are coming off in waves. I have to say I really like your interpretation of Wesker and of Sheva. The way you write them I can see it working. Again this is a good story, now on to the next chapter.

-Auktober

Yeah, Wesker has gone soft on Sheva and the feelings might be reciprocated. There are quite a few mistakes in your work but the plot is so very interesting it can be overlooked. I am still very much enjoying this story. Now, on to the next chapter.

-Auktober

Not really sure it was wise to have Sheva having a conversation with Wesker while at BSAA headquarters but hey. I enjoyed the awesome fighting scenes. Why Jill would have them fighting in the dark and not expect fatalities is beyond me, lol! I am enjoying your story thus far. On to the next chapter.

-Auktober

Wesker seemed jealous to me; perhaps I'm reaching but he had a bit of an attitude, lol. Leon deflowered poor Sheva, that kind of sucks but at least he did give her pleasure I suppose. What is Wesker up to I wonder? Well on to the next chapter.

-Auktober

I am enjoying this story. It is very interesting concept. Excella is a very manipulative one isn't she? I believe it was her that set Sheva and Josh up, and for some reason I don't think he is dead. When she heard that strange ringing in her ear, was that Wesker knocking her out or something? Was he the one that rescued her? I am anxious to know what is going to happen next. On to the next chapter.

-Auktober

This is a very interesting beginning. I am very intrigued by the Wesker/Sheva pairing. This is the first time I have seen it from this angle. I hope there will be a somewhat romantic pairing between them but if not I'm still interested in where this leads. On to the next chapter.

-Auktober

This is awesome please update soon :D

Poor Claire and Chris. I hope they don't die! Especially Claire! She's in my top 2. Can't believe Sherry killed 2 people... or was it Sheva with a different name... Oh well.
Looks like Jill knows who is a traitor! Can't wait to see how they keep her quiet.
Goodnight!

So you purposely made Leon a player, huh? I can see why, but that scene with Sheva... I don't think I could never see Leon making love to a new recruit and easily "falling for her." It reminds me of that one part in Romeo and Juliet where the main protagonists fall in love at first sight.
ADA NOOO! D': DAMN YOU WESKER!
BTW, it was kinda messed up with Wesker watching Leon and Sheva.
Laters.

I like Sheva & Leon as a couple. Its cute, what if she is preggers? Wesker would be mad. No one is happy when he is mad.

Main point I love your writing. Your good at what you do. Just sayin', cant wait for the next update.

This is very interesting. I cant wait for more!

Now I'm questioning if Josh is dead or not. I hope he's not.
"Shush. I'm not trying to molest you or anything"
I kind of figured that he'd say that, but hey... those were my thoughts on what he was going to do. (._. )

So far you're still doing good on keeping the characters in perfect order. Wesker, Excella, maybe Sheva.. Josh... I don't know. There weren't to many scenes with that guy in Resident Evil 5 unless you got the "Desperate Escape" DLC for the Jill and Josh mission or saw a video on it. Josh seems like a tiny bit of a flirt with pretty girls. He did compliment Jill by saying "There is always room for a beautiful lady." When she asked to join him on his helicopter to pursue Chris and Sheva. Also, like any other protagonist in Resident Evil, (excluding the villians) Josh is determined and loyal to his friends and teammates. Will you look at that... I guess I do know somethings about Josh. If you ever need more info on characters or whatever then you can always visit the Resident Evil Wiki site, play more Resident Evils, or watch videos on RE to determine their personalities, but only for the characters you do not know much about, but I doubt you'll need this stuff. ;)

It's an interesting read. I'm not crazy about first person POV, but I digress. Question; is this a Wesker/Sheva romance? While I admit that I'm not crazy about them either, a friend of mine wrote a story about them, and I do find them...interesting, to say the least.

Not a bad start. There's a few grammatical errors here and there, but I don't think it's enough to irritate anyone. Good job. I look forward to seeing more from you.