Wonderful job capturing Marle's personality. I do like that Crono talks now. He needed to earlier in the game actually. ;p I was wondering when you are going to finish this! And if you are going to go through with the entire game or just the Fair.

I think it's very good! I want more chapters!

OH! I LOVE YOU FIC! P-L-E-A-S-E CONTINUE!

Nice. Can't wait till you get to the good parts.

Review-back! :) Not bad, though I was expecting more of a traditional diary. One sugessetion (Can't spell!). You may want to go a tad bit faster. Chap. 11 and they haven't even skiped time. Just a warning, before this becomes MASSIVELY huge. Other than that, you're doing really good. Marle's funny!

Aw, you're welcome. _ I'm glad I mean so much to you. That makes me feel really special. I'm also very glad that you finally updated. This story's too nifty to be left unfinished. Of course, we're all guilty of going forever between updates. Myself, I have fanfic that I update every day on my LiveJournal, and yet I can only come up with one chapter of Cold as Ice every two months.

Anyway, onto the story. I like Marle's reaction to hearing the gossipy woman. It seems very believable, which is good. I also like the random thought of "Lucca must be pretty". I wonder how she'll react when she sees Lucca, then, considering how most people in CT say Lucca ISN'T pretty.

I look forward to chapters further along in the plot, where we'll get to see her personality change and grow. Something tells me that you'll write that very well.

Poor Marle. Who says words don't hurt? I hope things look up for her soon. Hurry with the next chapter!

Great chapter! PLEASE continue!

good now your starting to update good ch hurry with the next one please.

PLEASE CONTINUE, OR ALL OF THE REWIERWERS WILL HURT YOU!,

Oh WOW That is a great Fic, please continue it!

I like the language you used. Seems well set for 10AD. And your grammar is better than mine so dont worry _

Hey. - Me again. I was also gonna say something else. I really like it how u made Chrono talk.. what kind of story would it be where people don't talk? :S And even though some parts were a bit OOC, it just made the story more tense and real. By the way, a lot of people ARE OOC when they fall in ;) I'm ? I really like it the way you made Chrono sorta like a joker at first, and then made him go seriouse all of a sudden. It was really cool! :) And I like the AU parts u added. The game never shows us everything. That's what writting is for. :) I love POV's. They make you see the world thru someone else's eyes. You showed that well. Lookin' forward to ur next chappies. wanna see more 0 Update soon.

OH WOW! I got butterflies in my stomach when I was reading this (?) ; It's really a cute fic. I've been playing CT for nearly a month and just about finished it. At first I dind't really care, but now. I'm so into it. And I started to really like Chrono&Marle after the incident when Chrono was brought back to life. I don't know how to say this, but I REALLY REALLY would love it if you continued with the WHOLE story! I know it would be like 100 chappies atleast ;; But still. its really cool! I love the way you describe the atmosphere so detailed. I'd be so happy if you finished with Marle marrying Chrono. Really wanna know whats it like! _ (Wow this is a long review!) Great story, keep writting, and please end it with a marriage:) thanks alote! Made my day brighter :)

This is so cute! You stole my idea of writing it from Marle's POV though Lol. Well, mine was gonna be a bit different anyway. Keep writing though, this is really good!