THAT WAS AWESOME! You've had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! :D

CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP! And wasn't Yugi's disk taken from him? CRAP!

GAH! All I'm thinking right now is how the computer kept saying DATA CORRUPTED... So is Yami's condition Yugi's fault or did someone do that to him!? I can't wait for the next chapter!

please please please do the next chapter this is awsome! good job

Please update this soon! I really want to see where you take it.
So far it seems like you're writing is good, so keep up the good work. :)

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