Reviews for A Present Only He Could Give |
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MrRobertsIII chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 Nicely done. |
Rake1810 chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 Twisted, sad, happy. Really well done |
Stark chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 wow, it's the only thing I can say. It was so different and so incredible (in the good way) Believe me, you almost made me cry. |
TheMidnightPoet chapter 1 . 3/2/2015 This is so unbelievably cool! Please write at least one more chapter, I would really like to see Pepper's reaction to her AI daughter, and what said AI would be like. |
queenlmno chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Can you continue it? |
KatHarkness-Katara chapter 1 . 11/15/2014 Pretty good. Gimme a yell if you ever do more of this, 'kay? |
Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Good plot. Will there be mode? |
RedLetter4You chapter 1 . 11/6/2013 So sweet I hope you post more to this. ... I want to know what happens next :-D |
thetempestrising chapter 1 . 9/21/2013 This is great... I can't exactly find any words to describe this. I like your writing style, and I think you got all the characters down perfectly. A word of advice for any future works is to check over your work to look for any small errors in grammar or spelling. I didn't find any, but it never hurts to check. Great job, and good luck with any future works! -thetempestrising |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013 I think you made Tony a mad scientist, but i like it XD Though I wondered, if Tony could build an android, i think he should be able make Catherine appearance aging. |
Vivi-ntvg chapter 1 . 9/20/2013 That's really strange, but like you pointed out, Tony would be capable of anything xDD |
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 9/19/2013 Really liked this. |
Tarius Black chapter 1 . 9/19/2013 Awesome! Looks like a great beginning. Why do you have it listed as completed? |