Reviews for A Present Only He Could Give |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Twisted, sad, happy. Really well done |
![]() ![]() wow, it's the only thing I can say. It was so different and so incredible (in the good way) Believe me, you almost made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so unbelievably cool! Please write at least one more chapter, I would really like to see Pepper's reaction to her AI daughter, and what said AI would be like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you continue it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good. Gimme a yell if you ever do more of this, 'kay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good plot. Will there be mode? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet I hope you post more to this. ... I want to know what happens next :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great... I can't exactly find any words to describe this. I like your writing style, and I think you got all the characters down perfectly. A word of advice for any future works is to check over your work to look for any small errors in grammar or spelling. I didn't find any, but it never hurts to check. Great job, and good luck with any future works! -thetempestrising |
![]() ![]() I think you made Tony a mad scientist, but i like it XD Though I wondered, if Tony could build an android, i think he should be able make Catherine appearance aging. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's really strange, but like you pointed out, Tony would be capable of anything xDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Looks like a great beginning. Why do you have it listed as completed? |