Andrea doesn't deserve to die u must not know how she is in the comics she no where near her shitty tv counterpart

Could saved amy

So...what happened to Luke? He was there...then he wasn't...then people were missing him...I'm confused.

I loved this story and I hope you finish the sequel

squeee! FINALLY!

I love this story. Both characters work great together. Hope you might be considering a sequel.

I love how you give it to everybody in the group. good morning starts acting up I kinda hope you do the same thing to her lori

Hey there, so I've gotten to chapter 24 and one thing kind of irks me. Andy's reaction to what the Woodbury men did... I mean I'm sorry but it was totally unrealistic.
"I'm fine, it's not like it hasn't happened before."
I'm sorry but that's awful that rape can be brushed off so easily. Basically the gist seems to be,
"Oh well, it happened that one time, it doesn't affect me any more."
Please don't misinterpret what I'm trying to say, this is in no shape or form a flame but I would consider analysing the characters. There is quite a bit of OOC and the story jumped quite a bit, seeming rushed. You might also consider Andy a bit? She is able to hunt and track better than Daryl? Fully fledged in karate and wields a katana? She is also a fantastic artist. It's almost too much. People are flawed, and in that we want to relate to characters. We want to see them struggle.
Also, everything with Ashley and Hudson. I know you stated that you hadn't planned that and, forgive me, that was quite evident. I'd consider upping the rating to M as themes such as rape and abuse aren't exactly covered completely under T.
I don't mean to offend you in anyway but constructive criticism will always help, believe me, I've had my fair share of nasty reviews so I wouldn't intentionally insult someone's hard work. I hope you continue to write and feel free to PM me if anything I said was unclear.
-Dorcha-

4 and i love that song

Venison and jerky aren't the same thing; venison just means its deer meat. and you can make jerky out of all kinds of animals, hence why they say beef jerky, and not just jerky. I've had beef, venison, elk, and cajun

I love Daryl and Andy in this story, hope they can love each other and stay together forever.
And Belle is so cute,maybe Daryl and Andy can own their babies?

About the next story's title,I think the"Angel With A Shotgun "is good.
The angel is Andy? It sound sweet! Daryl's angel

I vote for number two. I don't know why but i just like the title. REMINDS ME OF THE SONG

OMG! Totally awesome! It's getting better and better. Thanks for sharing your writing talent :)

Please please please update! I'm addicted to this story, it's soooooooo good! Keep going!

Plz update soon!