So amazing and beautiful. Very well written. :) great job. BTW, I think John had only been shot twice though. Just saying/

Beautiful story though. I loved it .

I normally hate fics where people just rewrite the episode but yours had me hooked right from the beginning. In both chapters you describe the scene and their thoughts perfectly and it adds so much, picking up on the tiniest emotions that flicker across their faces and turning them into two very well written pieces. Thanks for sharing

Don.t how I missed this one before.
Well done!
Thanks

Very well done! All the feels! All the emotion! Thanks for sharing :)

Very we'll written story. This premise is well known to all POI fans, but you've added much more detail that everyone has wanted. Please update soon. I hope you continue the story we'll into or thru the Super episode. Thanks much for sharing!

Wow, this and the previous chapter are so good, sobbing all over again.

This was fantastic! You've put new concerns in a scene we all know so well. Thank you so, so much! _

Wonderful, you are a beautiful way with words. Thank you.

Excellent insite, great writing.

Love your story! I hope to read much more from you.

Very nice, well done, this scene still gets to me.

Always a pleasure to read about that great episode and you did a really good work!

Thanks for sharing and I'd love to read also about what happened next ;)

DAMMIT THAT WAS GOOD!