Reviews for Continuity |
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Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 11 . 1/9/2017 You ended it beautifully! Nice job! |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 9 . 1/9/2017 "Justin, I'm scared." 'he and Justin vanished from the continuity.' Man, you never really think about what happens to the alternate future as it disappears. Usually shows jump straight to the travelling back in time bit. You made me feel sad for them, even if this is for the good of the future. |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 8 . 1/9/2017 "I can't lose you again, Alex." afgsvcdcvfgnj I am emOTioN! |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 7 . 1/9/2017 Oh man are they busted? |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 6 . 1/9/2017 Future Max's face darkened with sorrow. "I know. I wish I wasn't." Oooh I bet when Alex died her powers passed on to Max! 'On impulse, Alex wrapped her arms around the young Max sitting next to her.' I love when she does this on the show! It's so cute! "He killed you, Alex." Called it! "[...] your powers as the family wizard passed to me." Calledddd it! I'm loving the twist and turns and the time travel element - my fav element of all, so imagine my excitement when I stumbled on this well-written story! And on that note, you definitely deserve reviews and it's okay to ask for them. Writers need feedback, and sadly a lot of readers on this website ignore that or just don't care. It's actually why I stopped uploading my stuff. Anywho, onto the next chapter! |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 5 . 1/9/2017 I'm loving your older Max! |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 4 . 1/9/2017 Ooh I bet Alex is dead in the future! |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 2 . 1/9/2017 I'm loving this! You're right about the potential of this episode. I remember watching it and thinking they should've made a cool movie out of it or something. Kudos to you for the awesome twists and keeping us readers hooked. It also helps that you barely have any mistakes. You're a talented writer! |
Write4Life chapter 11 . 3/12/2015 I absolutely love this fanfic! I like that you referred back to the early seasons of Wizards of Waverly place. Again great job, keep writing! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2014 wait didn't future harper call the person who sent her back the most powerful wizard or something so does that mean max is really powerful? |
ChloeyS chapter 4 . 1/3/2014 This should*ve been in the show! You are brilliant. Really |
Jessica chapter 11 . 12/13/2013 wait hold up that's it? whaaaaaaaaaaat. but.. no.. :( |
Jessica chapter 8 . 12/13/2013 I'm reading this in school, in the library, at lunchtime right now.. and I can't stop crying. people are probably gonna see my eyes all red and think I'm crazy or something lol but omg |
Kaycie232 chapter 11 . 12/12/2013 YAY! Beautiful ending |
WizKid chapter 11 . 12/12/2013 Hi its guest i loved ur write another one soon that maybe includes Mason haha sorry i love him. Your a great writer with alot of imagination i cant wait 2 read another story soon xxx |