Luckily, I read this wonderful story. The last few chapters were very impressive. The whole story came full circle in the end. I'm so happy and really grateful that you didn't give up on finishing the story in the end.

I last read this back when Anna was checking her pocket for the key, and now binge re-read it in ~4 hours. What a roller-coaster of emotion, much as I remembered it to be. The only thing I could wish for would have been to see more of them together outside of Spring City and the Everstorm, as SO MUCH of what time they had was fraught with angst. Regardless of that, however, I really enjoyed this story once more. Thank you.

Great story! Really loved the adventure and the original charactersI wonder if you were inspired a bit by Spirited Away for part of the story but either way it was lovely! Thank you for sharing!

This chapter was really fun to read. Anna and her shenanigans.

Thank you for writing this, I have a good time reading it

What a beautiful and heartwarming conclussion! Thank you so very much for all the effort put into the world-building and thank you for writing such powerful feelings. It was a truly lovely journey.

This fic is amazing! I loved the characterization of Anna!

Thank you very much for writing it!

Great story. Hope to see a sequel!

Made my lil day to read this and get an update. Take care! Remains one of my most favorite stories on fanfiction and I still think about it from time to time.

Congratulations on finishing this :) I don't really have anything else to add. It's nice that this finally reached a true conclusion.

Well, can’t remember much at all about this story, but if I followed it, it must have been good. Congratulations on finishing it.

The fic that got me started on my Elsanna path is finally finished. The circle is now complete :)

I am glad you finished this fic, Nina. I know the journey wasn't easy but you delivered at the very end. Hopefully, you'll visit the Elsanna subreddit again. It's changed plenty but some of us "oldies" are still there shipping our favorite sisters!

I hope this fic gets a resurgence of readers who can now finally enjoy a well-written Elsanna story

Haven't read this chapter yet but I just wanted to thank you for updating. I've followed for who knows how long at this point.
I'll probably have to reread from chapter 1 to remember all the events but that doesn't take away from the fact that WOW 6 years!
Congratulations on completing the fic!
Thank you for not abandoning it!
You should be proud, hell, I'm feeling proud of your accomplishment, good job! Thank you very much for writing :)

It has been a long, long time since I've read any of this story. I think I started reading this just a few months after you started, and kept with it as a regular reader until Chapter 27 (I think). Back then, this was near the top of my list of favorite Frozen fics, but now I'd place it somewhere in the top dozen or so.

The clarity in the composition and plotting is very good, overall. I think the plot is very self-referential and keeps a very good sense of solidarity. The characters have a high degree of faithfulness to their canonical counterparts and feel mostly true to themselves.

For as many elements that're at play in the story, I would expect there to be more expository language. It is rare that I would call a story too short, but that's how I feel with this work. It would have been nice to see more of Matilda's and Elsa's internal struggles, especially in the second half of the story where the focus was almost exclusively on Anna. Also, I found it odd how underutilized Olaf felt in this. To have him only appear at pretty much the tail-end of the story was unexpected, but his appearance was nonetheless a good one.

I don't really have any particular grievances, to be honest. The story as a whole really knows its own mettle, and keeps a cohesive narrative. The Elsanna in this feels organic, and pretty believable, to boot. I only wish there was more content, overall. Your writing style sticks very staunchly to "showing, not telling," and that's good, but the pace of everything feels mostly the same: brisk. The most important moments stick out in terms of context alone, not really in their delivery. If the centerpiece moments had more of a contrast in the level of detail, I think it could've elevated the story greatly.

This is all, of course, my opinion. As one of the first Elsanna fics I grew to love, I still value it a lot. To the author, Nina Windia, I wish you the very best in life. Thank you for sharing this work with the world.

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