Reviews for A Thin Veneer
WDWormack5114 chapter 54 . 6/16
Excuse me, the Vorlons became gods? Seriously?
The Vorlons built, "The Great Machinealmost destroying many of the "Younger Races", in the process. "And they fell SERIOUSLY SHORT of the 'Godhood', that they fervently hoped to attain.
WDWormack5114 chapter 44 . 6/12
Can you for PETE'S FREAKIN' SAKE; PLEASE EXPLAIN why you've let this Fanfiction go on for EIGHTY-THREE FREAKING CHAPTERS, and GO OUT of YOUR WAY PROTECT the VORLONS, LETTING THEM 'HIDE' FROM THE ALPHA QUADRANT'S YOUNGER RACES? Principally the Humans of the 'FEDERATION'?

You've constantly "promised to conclude this Epic crossover, and it's now June of 2020; and STILL there's NO ENDING!
WDWormack5114 chapter 42 . 6/11
Is it possible that there are a Cabal of Vorlons who have grown weary of, "Their Great Experiment"? That these Vorlons might have covertly arranged for the Earth Alliance ships to inadvertently 'slip' into this hyperchannel that swept them into the Alpa Quadrant, and into Klingon space, and on a heading towards Federation space and Earth?

As I've been reading this story, I note that because the Earth Alliance ships, and their Minbari pursuers, (or should I say slaughterers) wound up in the Alpa Quadrant; TWO major events have been altered. One major event to each interstellar community.

In the Universe of the Alpha Quadrant, while the Klingon Empire, and UFP, are about to enter into peace talks, "cooling off" decades of "Cold War Style" adversarial conflict. The arrival of those ships, also prevented the assassination of Klingon Chancellor Gorkon. And it also stopped the factions in both the 'Federation',Klingon' Gov'ts, that were adamantly OPPOSED to the proposed "Cessation of Hostilities!" as it were.

And in the Vorlon Dominated Space, the Minbari's "War of Righteous Retribution", is continuing in devastating enthusiasm. Earth Alliance/'EarthForce', it appears that the "Battle of the Line", hasn't taken place. So the Minbari have yet to "discover the secret that spares humanity" from utter annihilation; and forces the Minbari to 'surrender' and end the war.

Without these events in this universe, the Babylon stations are never constructed. (Which was the "War Reparations" that the Minbari demanded of EA Gov't.
WDWormack5114 chapter 42 . 6/11
Is it just me, or is the "Vorlon all knowing", seem immensely limited, in scope?
WDWormack5114 chapter 31 . 6/8
Is that why you have "conveniently omittedLorien', THE First
WDWormack5114 chapter 24 . 6/7
To Albert G...

First, Greetings Sir.

Please accept in advance, my apologies for unintentionally 'murdering' the English language, and my various 'tortures' in the form of lack of punctuation, and atrocious grammar.

And now, on to my review. As you know, I have been a very avid follower of this particular story for quite some time now.
I have followed the twists and turns of this crossover with keen interest. It always fascinated me how in the Babylon 5/Earth Alliance region of the galaxy, the major star faring Powers, never made any efforts to develop their own advanced technologies!

In Earth Alliance space, the Vorlons basically were allowed to totally 'corrupt' all of the younger races within their rather "stunted sphere of influence"! The Vorlons and to a somewhat lesser extent; the Shadows, overplayed the whole "God thing", to the various younger races, in their region of space.
xet1ret chapter 63 . 4/1
The Rush 2112 reference had me laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair. And so oddly appropriate for the scene.
Guest chapter 83 . 2/2
For god's sake Skeet, FINISH THIS!
Anyone who's been reading this from the beginning, when you were still batting ideas around with Rastamon & Ed, knows full well this is one of the crown jewels of ST & B5 fanfiction, let alone 'merely' the B5-ST crossover genre. And it deserves an ending & epilogue.

~Barricade (yes, that annoyance of yours from SB)
Guest chapter 38 . 1/8
Bigoted?considering this is a war if genocide and he's bigoted?
Guest chapter 31 . 1/5
The Germans didn't exterminate Catholics,most of Germany was Lutheran or Catholic.
Guest chapter 30 . 1/5
The dilgar sent a fleet into the sol system 30 yrs before in an attempt to keep the earth alliance out of the war by crippling our fleet,we got Advance notice from the barn and were waiting when they after that the dilgar surrendered.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/17/2019
A minbari crusier was lost at the battle of sinzar.
k4m3j0 chapter 83 . 11/25/2019
I can see your working on stories so you ain't dead... ;) I just burned through this entire story in the last two months and am really looking forward to the conclusion.
Brad chapter 83 . 9/25/2019
This story will hit big time in hard copy pocketbooks series, most likely in CGI movies too.
WDWormack5114 chapter 37 . 9/14/2019
Dear Author,

I'm just finishing another reading of "A Thin Veneer". And while it's still as awesome, as it was the first time I read it. I still keep wondering, WHY IT STILL DOESN'T HAVE a ENDING! (Please excuse the "ALL CAPS"!)

I still keep waiting for the much anticipated "Kirk/Chang confrontation', that has been brewing/stewing, all throughout this whole 'saga'. And then there's the Earth Alliance/Minbari 'situation'! "With a little help, from some friends", An Earth, that was literally on the verge of extinction, has managed to fight off their would be Conquerors, and make them seriously consider sueing for, A MUCH-NEEDED PEACE!

And, last, but DEFINITELY, not LEAST, There's the very seriously delusional, DERANGED, COSMIC DIP-STICKS, who're way too responsible for this mess!
The whole 'INCESTUOS', Vorlon/Minbari/Ashen relationship. Where the Minbari, in their eons long, "cosmic-dmeasuring contest with their "cosmic 'frienemies'", the Shadows, have totally 'UPGHEFUCHTED', "their little section of the COSMOS!"
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