Some of the grammar errors are a bit cringey, seriously it looks like you half finished some words before moving on. But other than that, this is good stuff! Lady andromeda is quite the character, befitting an over lady who doesn't have to serve the role of a player avatar. Basically it's everything I wanted in this sort of story

what the fuck happened to the overlordyness or overladyness you know killing?

P.S overlordyness and overladyness not a word

i dont know if your still wrighting but if you are then please continue this. Is really good and i wanna know what happens next.

Why no update

I like the concept, looking forward to reading the rest

OOoooh,. Very well written. I like your style of writing, well done.

hope you write more can't wait to read it!

lol...girlly overlord just got her first crush kiss now she wants to bludger his brains out and burn his manhood on a pryer...or just kiss him back

I love it!

I can't wait to see Andromeda's future adventures. So if she got a power up from a female swamp spirit, will get get a boost from a succubus if she faces one?

Oh I am glad my patient waiting has paid off. Love this story and love the Overlady. Hmmm, don't see as much of the minions as I would expect but I'm glad to see that our Queen isnt scared of getting her hands dirty. Love the story :D

Hmm... I don't really have any advice to give except that you may want to double check your chapters for things like using where instead of wear like you did in this one and previous chapters.

Also there was nothing about her being knocked out, just getting out of the water then waking up in woman's home. Just incase that was by accident.

This is Epic! :)

even if English is your second language I think your doing really good. Or had been doing realy good. May I ask if you were planning on continueing this story? I think it's great.

I always come back. To see no new updates and it has been months since your last update. Can you update sometime soon? please? :/