This is awesome!
Plz continuing!

Hiya this was a great chapter. Please keep up the good work. :)

i love the story so far. can’t wait for the next chapter!

I look forward to seeing when or if you get to the part where Hashira and Toshiro become parents to some interesting looking little ones.

I know it more that likely won't happen for quite some time, but I'm really interested in when it does occur.

You know, when the lovers are finally together?

At least that much.

Please update more soon!

Its been months! Not even i go for months without doing anything!

I love reading this story. It is my third time readig it and I cant wait to read the next chapter of the story. :)

Hm, following the manga are we? That's fine, it's interesting to see what you'll do differently than me. Loved how you used Hashira's love of insects to help win the shadow game, and acknowledged her fear of Yugi eating ice cream. LOL!

Can't wait to see what's next, bye!

Toshiro! No killing Atemu/Yami, I need him for my stories!

Anyway, nice job with Hashira doing the shadow game, but you could put a few paragraphs in the one large paragraph you have I get twitchy when I see a big hunk of writing that can be spaced out a little more.

Poor Yugi getting hurt. I hope that Hashira and possibly Yami were able to comfort him.

Can't wait to see what's next! Later!

Awesome book make more please!

I see you skipped the shadow games with the director and the music dude. Kinda sad, I wanted to see Tomoya Hanasaki. Oh well, I can wait. Good job, but the way you worded it made me think that Hashira was the only one blindfolded. Maybe you could add a few more sentences that say Yugi is being held hostage with Hashira more towards the start, like when they get blindfolded. But keep it up!

Whew! I also remember how long this chapter was to type. Nice job with it, I liked how Hashira had Yugi in her room when he solved the puzzle. It just goes to show how much she cares. I also see you went with the manga version of the shadow game. Good job. Can't wait to see what's next.

I see that you did the manga version instead of the season 0 version. That's ok though, it means you're starting to branch out a bit and you're doing a good job so far.

Can't wait to see what's next.

Wow, I will wait for the next chapter 4.

Cool and I like it. Update the next Chapter.