Reviews for Memories Lost
sarge1130 chapter 5 . 2/25/2018
Love how this story ended. The two pirates and the bounty hunter had got what they wanted without having a brutal fight. Like it how Luffy assured Law that his feelings for him are still the same, with or without his memories. Though Luffy forgets his relationship with Law, his heart knows that Law is truly special for him. That is just so sweet :). Thanks for the update :D.
guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2018
Thanks for writing. You can mark the story complete if it’s finished. You can often get more views that way :-)
Ryan Mashall chapter 5 . 1/31/2018
Despite at least half of this chapter bding exact repeat of the previous chp, the other part tht was new was good, quick, bt still good, thanks!
Ryan Mashall chapter 4 . 1/31/2018
Convenient
Ryan Mashall chapter 3 . 1/31/2018
Oh law...
Ryan Mashall chapter 2 . 1/31/2018
Poor luffy to hv to relive tht
Tatrin chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
I read the summary, and you. Are. CRUEL. Torao's going to have to choose between letting Luffy go, happily believing the false reality that Ace is alive, or force him to remember that Ace is dead
Ryan Mashall chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
Well that isnt good...
sarge1130 chapter 4 . 10/27/2017
Awww, my heart! If the mind doesn't remember, maybe the heart will. I never expected the kiss, but I like it how it turns out. Love the stunt Law did with Zoro and Robin. That was a cute scene :). Thanks for the update :D.
sarge1130 chapter 3 . 10/27/2017
Aww, this was just so sad. They avoided to take a sleep in their love nest - the captain's quarters, lol. Like it how Zoro and Robin fill up the details to Luffy. They avoided the Law part which I think is special and have let Luffy follow his heart how to remember it.
sarge1130 chapter 2 . 10/27/2017
Luffy's memory is only up to Sabaody arc, then does it means that the longer the girl touch him, the greater amount of memories are lost? Poor Law. At least there are other Strawhats pirates who are there to help him. I like it that you had point out one of Luffy's strong trait - thr ability to determine anyone if he is good or not.
sarge1130 chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
Like this! This is only the first chapter but I was dosed already with cute and fluffy LawLu moment. Love it how Luffy is so straightforward. Like the sudden shift at the end though. Never expected that Luffy got shot by (I think) seastone bullet. I thought Luffy will sense it just as Law sense in with Smoker's jutte during their fight in PH. Or maybe it was a bullet so Luffy can't react that so fast.
guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2017
An interesting read, but is Law immune to seastone in this fic? I guess the bullet to his side was seastone? He was still able to use his powers? I know that some abilities can remain, though greatly weakened, I think. Also, Law has a broken nose. When did he fix that, or did he fix it? Sorry if you explained in the writing and I missed it. I guess he doesn’t look too battle-weary when he returns to the boat, so there is no Strawhat concern over his own injuries.

Despite what might be inconsistencies, this is well-written, with a good pace. Good luck with the next chapters.
DriaGriff chapter 2 . 10/11/2017
I can't wait for the next chapter! Such a good story so far. Good job!
DefendTheUndefended chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
Love it!