I've been meaning to check out your stories for some time, and I'm glad that I started with The Coming Storm!

I think you're handling Sonic and Tails' emotions rather well. The therapy session felt authentic, and their feelings feel genuine. Your interpretation of their first encounter was also memorable and sweet.

Looking forward to seeing what happens on their camping trip! It'll be a good opportunity for the brotherly duo to unpack their feelings...that is, unless you have something else in store for them...

Really good so far! It'll be interesting to see ahere this goes! Cant wait to read the rest of it!

Lovely dynamics in this chapter between the two. I'm really enjoying their interactions. Just watch for those serial commas!

I really love this story so far! Of course, your own life and health should come first, but I'm really excited to see what happens whenever you're able to update!

yeah, life comes first, i know that first hand.
thats why 80% of times i notice an update to any story of yours i lay down all my work/studies and read! who need responsibilities when you can check out a new awesome chapter, am i right?!
seriously now, its good, just trying to switch up my comments. though it kinda sucks that nothing really happens in this chapter plotwise. but giving background information is important, so its okay, still like it

This is definitely different than your previous, more dynamic stories. I can see how this resembles 'Signs', since Eggman is out of the picture. Interested to see what hardships will they have to face. Don't forget about this story, it's going good.

Like it, as always with your stories

Love this prologue! Really excited to follow along for the ride with this story! Cant wait for the next chapter! :)

I do remember "Signs" vividly, and I'm getting some nice vibes out of this one, too. Although the premise has these two somewhat distant than before, I'm looking forward to see how their relationship will progress. Great start here!

~TGN